Love and Tenacity - Comments

v Of course. I'm sure it's amazing.
One thing I congratulate is your use of normal names.
I mean God no one's name's Ervwhynn or something geezus
lul

@ scarecrow heart.
Thanks, I very well may. And if I've written it well enough, hopefully reading it won't be a chore! :)

v Anything for a fellow writer, friend. :) I hope I can keep track of my reading. I rarely read chaptered stories fully, so this will be an adventure. hah. You can always inbox me if you'd like some help or just a tip or two c:

@ scarecrow heart.
Thank you so much for the comment! I just finished fixing the formatting, so it's much more readable now :) I really hope you enjoy the rest of it, and believe me, your advice was VERY appreciated - I'm pretty new at writing, so feedback is valuable :)

heyyy. i really like where this is going. unfortunately i only read the first chapter because you really need to fix the formatting. you need an entire line between paragraphs, it's a rule here on mibba.

aside from that, as a writer and lover of fantasy myself this is amazing! all the names, the storyline, the background info, it all fits together well. and a blind princess aided by a witch, a peasant, a friend and a murderer. what a strance accompaniment, lel. i really enjoy your writing style.

just fix the paragraphs, maybe make a layout, and put a link in your signature! you'll get loads of readers. :)