This is so beautiful. Like seriously I'm so speechless. I love how you have Yale and Alex both as dangerous boys. And I don't know, danger always pulls me in so I love this.
First of all, I'm so, so sorry it took me so long to complete your Mibbaween treat from me. Better late than never lol.
First off, I wish I had read this sooner. It's so sadly beautiful. I still have about three chapters left but I really really like this story up until now.
I love how you describe Daria in terms of her abusive relationship. A lot of people don't understand that it's not an easy thing for a victim to get out of, it being a sort of vicious cycle.
Random thought: I love how in chapter 6 she refers to Yale as the dangerous boy instead of Alex. I don't know, that just impacted me in a away lol
Hi I'm here from my mibbaween bowl. I like your descriptions. The summary had my attention right off the bat and I love that Alex seems to have a split personality. It kind of threw me though because I thought, from your summary, that Alex wasn't your main character's boyfriend? I love the fact that her angel... the music in the earbud is her dad and not just some sick obsession she has with some bad guy who she thinks can save her.
I finally got around to reading this. Sorry for forgetting your Mibbaween treat. But I really like the writing style of this. It's nice and very smooth. You're talented at forming characters. Well done!
I've finally gotten around to reading through your story! :] Right when Yale makes his entrance, I just instantaneously love him. I'm really looking forward to seeing more of what goes on between Yale and Daria. I feel like they complement each other well and it's fun to read about them together. I just want to know more about the characters!
I'll subscribe so I can keep track of your updates. :3 Keep writing!