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Pleeeease update soon!

@ RockOut
lol alrighty. I shall keep that in mind. I haven't lost inspiration.....just been busy with M. Shadows bugging me with his sexiness! Ugh.

Ummmmmmmmm I really miss this story. :-( I'm thinking there should be an update this week as a happy belated birthday to me lol.

So. first off, sorry it seems like I took foREVer (hehe...he..get it) to give a comment. this is one of the more lengthy stories so that's why. Anyway, yes, this story. You know I love your writing already woman.

So. I definitely did not expect that. Not one friggin' bit. Like, I thought it'd be y'know Jamie and Brian are friends, and one of em likes the other more than that and then it'd go on from there, (there's nothing wrong with that either) but, I was thrown for a complete loop. Like, omg.

Mind you, I'm still in mid-read so I'm not yet fully caught up but I'll get there.

One thing, in some parts the dialog would be missing a ( " ) at the beginning, but that's just itty bitty mistakes so nothing to fear.

But ok, I'm gonna go and read some more and then come back to comment. Haha

I tried to see if Mibba would finally load up later chapters and it did! I got back to reading and I just want to say that this is a really good story :) Alright. I'm going back to reading!

@ RockOut
Yay! Finally someone who didn't like him lol. You made my day!

To be completely honest Jason was a major creeper in this chapter...I didn't like him at all lol.

@ acid_rain88
>=) Hahaha indeed! Ugh, I'm so excited for everyone to read what happens but I just gotta slow down and take my time to write it so it's good and juicy. Thanks for commenting!

@ acid_rain88
>=) Hahaha indeed! Ugh, I'm so excited for everyone to read what happens but I just gotta slow down and take my time to write it so it's good and juicy. Thanks for commenting!

aawe! jason is so cute in that pic!! and sweet in the story- so far at least
ya know the music thing in the car at first had me thinking that he'd show his true colors now- that he'd be a douche and all, but he just kept being super sweet and funny
what I think about the two of them? they're cute together BUT I don't think it'll work out.. either he's going to do or say something stupid at the club OR Brian the suspicious little fellah will follow jamie and see the two of them together and flip his shit...
I could totally be wrong about both though.. there's so many ways that can go

Story swap \(^_^)/

Note: I usually don't read bandfiction. I only know a few A7X songs so therefore not so much about the band itself. I'm going in cold.

With that being said, let's begin!

Ch. 1: "...went on the hunt for some booty." I can't stop laughing!
Well, i think this story is off to an okay start. It was a tad slow and I didn't see the point in some of the dialogue. But, it did help build up the tension. When you described Brian and Jamie's friendship and then her talk to Valery, I was expecting this to be like a lot of other stories. But then the end came. That definitely wasn't the question I was expecting.

Ch. 2: I like the focus in this chapter. It built up more tension to the plot. I have to say that I'm on Brian's side with this one. Sure, he fucked other girls but I can tell he really doesn't want to hurt Jamie so I see where he's coming from.

Ch. 3: "..not to be fucked with." My dirty mind put too much irony in this sentence.
It was nice to get a background story on Brian. It explained some of his behavior, I guess.

I waited five minutes for chapter 4 to load just for Mibba to be like, "lulz no." It led me to an error page. I refreshed ten times and got the same thing each time. I even had to refresh a bajillion times to get to the comments. Because of this I'm going to have to cut the comment short here :( I'm sorry that I couldn't expand this!

From what I read so far, this story does have a lot of potential. I'm very interested in what Jamie is going to do so hopefully Mibba decides to work and I can read about it! :)

I feel like Brian is going to want her now, just because she's with Jason. I like their relationship (J & J), even if he is a little too forward for my taste.

Jason is adorable and I have a feeling that suspicious brian (LOL) will get suspicious and follow them and then get all jealous again like he did when they were painting

I'm really excited for the next chapter! . Please update again soon. Xx

@ Ailurophile
I never had a brother either but I've seen some guys be way protective of their siblings! Hehe I can't wait til you read the next chapter!

@ OMFGitsBeckiie
Muwahaha! Everything I do in my stories is intentional so him being forward has a reason that shall soon ne revealed wuhahaha! >:) *grins evily* Thanks for the lovely comment!

I thought the date was adorable! I thought the whole picture thing was a little forward but i'll look past it lol. The kiss was adorable as shit too. I love the whole idea of Jamie and Jason and I also love the idea of Brian and Jimmy finding out. I can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon!

I think the date was pretty cute, except the ipod situation (that was odd of him). I think Brian's the first that's going to find out. Jimmy should take a chill pill and not freak out over Jamie so much lol, but I guess some big brothers are like that. But I wouldn't know haha.

Great update, looking forward to the next one

@ Mrs. McCarron
lol It's okay. Mibba is wonky! I'm going to try and update it again very soon! I'm getting to the exciting parts hehe.

@ Mrs. McCarron
lol It's okay. Mibba is wonky! I'm going to try and update it again very soon! I'm getting to the exciting parts hehe.