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  • JustShrugAtlas

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    That was so sweet and very intense. I love how they aren't forcing her into anything and are making her say what she wants before continuing. I love how they make her apart of it all and not just allow her to close her eyes and allow it to be apart of it. I can't wait to see them having sex with her at the same time. Please update soon. :D
    October 1st, 2013 at 03:38am
  • silent hearts.

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    Truthfully, you are far too hard on yourself. The ideas are fantastic, the writing is extrordinary, and you continue to show that you care about your readers. Just keep doing what you're doing, because it's great. <3
    October 1st, 2013 at 03:23am
  • wedxsahf

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    I love this story!
    Keep up the good work! :)
    October 1st, 2013 at 03:08am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Fucking holy hell!!
    More soon please!!
    October 1st, 2013 at 02:58am
  • Alice Verney

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    Holy hot mama
    October 1st, 2013 at 02:48am
  • Ailurophile

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    THAT IS EVIL!! Don't leave me hanging!! lol
    September 29th, 2013 at 05:06pm
  • heretic.

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    It is hot in here... Holy mother of god! Please, don't apologise for the steamy smut, no complaints here whatsoever haha.

    God, these two are just dream boats aren't they? Poor Amos might actually combust and I'll be following along with her XD

    More soon, most definitely!
    September 29th, 2013 at 05:23am
  • CiaraCobb

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    YOU CAN'T STOP THERE...Dude that's so cruel. Please update again soon. Now I'm just gonna go open a window and get some air, it seems a little warm in here....
    September 28th, 2013 at 02:47pm
  • fiction246

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    Don't think I have ever been more jealous of a fictional character...just putting that out there :P looking forward to more :)
    September 28th, 2013 at 11:01am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Amazing chapter!!!
    Can't wait to read more!
    Update soon please!
    September 28th, 2013 at 07:59am
  • NaiveDove

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    Ah! I can't wait to read more. Great chapter.
    September 27th, 2013 at 10:52pm
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    I'm definitely okay with more smut. :) I'm excited to see how this is going to play out. Update soon!!! :)
    September 27th, 2013 at 10:40pm
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    I'm definitely okay with more smut. :) I'm excited to see how this is going to play out. Update soon!!! :)
    September 27th, 2013 at 10:40pm
  • requiem.

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    Great update! Would love a layout for this too.
    September 27th, 2013 at 10:03pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    I can't wait for the next chapter. Great update !! :)
    September 27th, 2013 at 09:20pm
  • KareBearIsDead!

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    I never found Desecrate Through Reverence smutty at all =/ hopefully this will be lol
    September 27th, 2013 at 08:46pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I just love this story :)
    Update soon
    Amazing chapter
    September 27th, 2013 at 07:55pm
  • AJ9

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    Smutty, I don't have a problem with. I love this story and hope you can update this again soon. Also, will you be updating Desecrate Through Reverence again soon? I hope so ..... Xx Mr. Green
    September 27th, 2013 at 07:35pm
  • Alice Verney

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    Ooo holy fuck that's hot
    September 27th, 2013 at 07:12pm
  • HaloRage1313

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    Oh man, I'm sadden that I have to stop reading this awesome story till a new update. I hope its soon I have fell in love with is story!!! :D
    September 24th, 2013 at 09:29am
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