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  • M12798501R

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    Oh my god the dance part was só damn perfect ;) come Back soon
    November 5th, 2013 at 04:33am
  • Chloe Gray

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    Tommy is such a sweetheart! Apart from the violence.. I love him! Great update!
    October 26th, 2013 at 03:41pm
  • zabetheliza79

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    Short, but sweet chapter. "You're my best friend...I'll do anything for you." Yeah, Tommy's fallen for her hook, line, and sinker. I like his mood shift after she tells him about the rumors. Merk is so clueless. Great stuff. Thanks for updating. Can' t wait for some more.
    October 24th, 2013 at 11:35pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    He's so denying his feelings!
    October 24th, 2013 at 10:18pm
  • thardyv

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    @ M12798501R
    October 24th, 2013 at 10:13am
  • M12798501R

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    Oh god tommy is the best with her;) come Back nowwww
    October 24th, 2013 at 10:11am
  • Chloe Gray

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    Lying bastard. He cheated. I don't believe him. Nope. No way.
    October 22nd, 2013 at 08:03am
  • zabetheliza79

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    Yay! Patrick got punched in the face. Great chapter. Now I'm dying to know if Tommy overheard Lena's 'virginal confession' before he attacked Patrick. I love the angst in the beginning of the chapter. Lena narrating that she has been avoiding Tommy, and questioning why she is so disappointed about being labeled "not doable." The character 's are nicely layered. I know you just updated, but cant wait to see how the fallout plays out.
    October 21st, 2013 at 05:56pm
  • M12798501R

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    @ thardyv
    O can't hardly wait
    October 21st, 2013 at 05:00pm
  • thardyv

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    I love you all! Thanks for loving the story, it really means a lot and I'm sorry if a haven't responded to your comments sooner.. Its been hectic. But enjoyable.

    Cant wait to write the next chapter guys! Image
    October 21st, 2013 at 03:37am
  • thardyv

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    I can relate to her also, and Lena. I like em both Wink

    Things.. are going to change.. that's for sure.
    October 21st, 2013 at 03:29am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Lol relate to Brooklyn so much it's makes me laugh. :D
    Damn, things about get worse.
    October 20th, 2013 at 09:52pm
  • M12798501R

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    I just love love This story!!!!!! I hope you update soon;)
    October 20th, 2013 at 04:17pm
  • Ashley8726

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    Love it... :)
    October 20th, 2013 at 03:46pm
  • jwilliams2

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    ah....I love this story. I do love her and Tommy. He is so different with and for her. She is the best thing for him. As he is for her.....he doesn't give a damn what people think...and she needs to adopt that thought process.
    October 20th, 2013 at 03:08pm
  • zabetheliza79

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    I had to go back and re-read this story. I needed a fix.

    I cannot wait to watch Patrick and her implode. I'm with chloe gray on this. Patrick has way to many late night practices. What is really up?

    That question is rhetorical I know that you cant tell me. Cool

    Fingers cross that you update soon.
    October 7th, 2013 at 08:27pm
  • kylabeth

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    I hope to see an update soon!! Really liking this one!
    October 4th, 2013 at 07:47pm
  • yolande

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    next update?
    October 1st, 2013 at 10:52am
  • thardyv

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    @ Ashley8726
    Heeeeeee it really means a lot to me to hear that.

    ❤️ thanks
    September 28th, 2013 at 07:00am
  • Ashley8726

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    I figured... As much grl you are amazing as always with these stories.
    September 28th, 2013 at 05:18am