Walking Disaster - Comments

@ Chloe29
Why thank you :)

Cool chapter.....I definitely like

@ kelseyyxbia
Oh my gosh! ❤️ I based Merk off of myself so it means we're alike haha and Brooklyn is more of my outgoing side.. I guess. Oh this makes me so happy. ❤️ :)

You'll fine your Tommy! Don't worry

Can I just say how much I love this. Merk reminds me so much of myself and Brooklyn is like my 2 close friends in one. And the setting is in Michigan, where I live. If only I could find my own Tommy

Melting on the floor with how sweet Tommy is with her. Well written chapter.

nice

Well, to be honest he didn't ask and even if he did she would have said no. So just mess with them and say 'I don't know' with a smile. ;)

I just love this so much. Those two together are practically perfect (because there is no such thing as perfection). They both clearly have feelings for the other, but they are both terrified of doing something about it. But then, if you're scared to do something, doesn't that usually make it the right thing to do? The right thing to pursue? Gah. In love. <3

awesome

Awe man. Things heating up now.

Okay, I've re-read this chapter cause I miss this story, and just need to weigh in on it. We are all entitled to our own opinion, and so this is mine. It would make perfect sense for Tommy to make a move when both are slightly inebriated. Anyone who had ever been in that state(yeah this kid...perpetually drunk from 21 till 23: not proud) knows inhibition is down, and it is easier to get caught up in the moment. Alcohol can be a truth serum.

It's one thing if Merk was being molested on the dance floor, but the fact that she was enjoying the experience doesn't qualify. Besides I cant wait for the awkward exchange between the two when discussing what happened. Please write. Please update. This is my favorite story. Shh don't tell the others: okay, three of the six stories I'm subscribed to are yours. Still I don't want any hard feelings, or negative vibes.

Yeah I think it may have been the juicy stuff.. I love reading about when things get hot but I just wasn't a fan of how Tom came onto Merk for the first time :(
But all good, still looking forward to reading the next chapter :)
Keep up the good work x

@ jwilliams2
Oh my god i think the same way ;)

Lol I knew it. ;D

@ anirahs_510
I'm sorry, was it the ending of the juicy stuff? Or nothing happening.

I unfortunately am not a fan of this chapter :( hopefully I can be reeled back into the story.
keep the updates coming, always excited to read the next chapter :)

Veronica...are you flipping serious right now? T_T you just...stopped when it was getting juicy....uuuuughhhhhhhheerrrrjhhjhhhmmmrr *flips chairs*

nice!!

I really so love this story. I love how Tommy is with her. Please make him be her first...her last....her forever.

I really so love this story. I love how Tommy is with her. Please make him be her first...her last....her forever.