Boy Of The Year - Comments

  • discoveringclouds

    discoveringclouds (200)

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    @ gh0st-writer
    That's true. Dark make up usually gives a very distasteful appearance or idea. Like she had to put layers on to hide something or was feeling insecure.
    It was kind of weird they he stated what we could have assumed when he isn't talking to the reader you know? It's better to write what is happening and what is there instead of what might happen or isn't there. Unless you're doing it specifically with a certain writing style. Then people can guess. But this was weird. Lol

    But being beautiful in the eyes of the creator if it means being ugly in the eyes of the creation is worth it.
    November 14th, 2013 at 12:08am
  • gh0st-writer

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    @ discoveringclouds
    thanks! i'm trying to get away from my traditional style.

    but, usually, if you hear of someone with all dark makeup, you think they might look messy. i dunno. i asked a few people, and they said they'd think that she'd not match. not messy, but like, yeah. not matching.
    November 13th, 2013 at 02:31am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Why do you think we assume that she looked like a mess?

    Interesting writing style!!
    November 13th, 2013 at 01:56am