When A Stranger Calls - Comments

Wow... this story is really touching - not the psycho part, the friendship between the girls.
Once again, I say, this story is really amazing!
=D

its really good

Chapter 4: I can definitly see the story building now as things are beginning to string together. I have an inkling that Gerard and the lead character do in fact know each other? Just a suspicion; i'll look like an utter twat if i'm wrong :) I want the chapters to be longer! But, on the other hand they are broken up in such a way that we're not bore by the current events drawing out longer than necessary :) x

The last line definitly made me chuckle; it's totally believable that Gerard is this sick fanatic breaking into peoples' houses and killing their dogs. I think i'm being picky when i say i would have liked a more detailed description of the surroundings, but that may just be me. Onwards to chapter 4>

Hmm interesting... I definitly loved the use of rhetorical questions; nobody uses them properly anymore but you've managed to incorporate them in such a way that it totally fits with the suspense extorted. Haha i don't think i have any need to continue criticism, i just want to read it now :)

I like this beginning; it's structured, stable and gripping, yet you've managed not to give too much away. There are some grammatical structures that i don't identify well with but it's a darn sight better than half the shit loaded onto this site. On to the next chapter! x

blackfeather:

I don't know if you consider this important as per the topic being inactive stuff lol but I've just read your story from beginning to end and thoroughly enjoyed it.
You already know how much I love mad, bad ,dangerous to know Gee but your psycho, loony Gee was brilliant. He may rub off on me and make an appearance in an upcoming chapter of my own lol.
I love your descriptions, dialogue and your wonderful sense of humour.
I'll be keeping an eye out for whatever you write next
xoxo

That means such a lot to me. No one has read this for such a long time as you can see, so to get even one new reader inspires me to write even more. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Thanks for actually saying WHAT you like about it, rather than you just think it's good. If my loony Gee does make an appearance in your story somewhere, remember where you got your inspiration from eh sugar?

I CONSIDER YOUR COMMENT VERY IMPORTANT, SO THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Love and HUGE hugs and kisses!

I don't know if you consider this important as per the topic being inactive stuff lol but I've just read your story from beginning to end and thoroughly enjoyed it.
You already know how much I love mad, bad ,dangerous to know Gee but your psycho, loony Gee was brilliant. He may rub off on me and make an appearance in an upcoming chapter of my own lol.
I love your descriptions, dialogue and your wonderful sense of humour.
I'll be keeping an eye out for whatever you write next
xoxo

mcrmom:

Wow, I thought the previous chapter was the last one.

So sweet to try and replace the pup G killed. Thanks!

No, thank you. Hope you liked it.

Wow, I thought the previous chapter was the last one.

So sweet to try and replace the pup G killed. Thanks!

mcrmom:

Whoa! Good on Sarah for showing up when she did!

I know! Glad you're still enjoying it hun. You would tell me if it was the biggest load of shite, wouldn't you? I hope/think you would.

Thanks for keeping up with this story. Pretty much 99% sure that the next chapter will be the last. To be quite honest with you, I'll miss writing this story. I've enjoyed writing it more than my last one as I feel that I have built the story up and have put a lot of thought into it. Not that I didn't with the last one, but it was my first story on here and there was always room for improvement.

Thanks mate.

Love and HUGE hugs!

Whoa! Good on Sarah for showing up when she did!

mcrmom:

Damn! le gasp! I knew G was messing with her! Man, he's really f'ed up!! Poor Lucy...
Oh and what I meant when I said something didn't smell right, was that his story was detailed, but also convenient. And now he's gone and attacked Sarah!!

Ahhh, right. That's sorted that out then. I thought you were starting to lose the plot of it and I didn't want that to happen. A good lunatic can lie very well and that's what I've tried to portray with Gerard. Deep down he does really love Lucy, but, like you say he is seriously f*&@ed up and he doesn't want anyone getting in their way.

Glad you enjoyed the update hun. Thanks so much for your inspiring comment. You've made me smile today!

Damn! le gasp! I knew G was messing with her! Man, he's really f'ed up!! Poor Lucy...
Oh and what I meant when I said something didn't smell right, was that his story was detailed, but also convenient. And now he's gone and attacked Sarah!!

remembering sundayy:

i love this story :D
i love the suspence
it kept me hooked the whole time
i cant wait to read more

Ahhh, a new reader. Oooh, lovely! Thanks very much for your comment. I'm glad you like it so far. Keep your eyes peeled for more updates as it won't be long now until it's finished. I'd say in the next 3-5 chapters it will be finished hopefully. Seriously, thanks again!

i love this story :D
i love the suspence
it kept me hooked the whole time
i cant wait to read more

mcrmom:

Hmmm...something still doesn't smell right here....

Is that in a good way? Or do you mean it seriously doesn't add up? Can you divulge more hun? I want comments whether they're good or bad; I always like to improve as I am by no means perfect.

I feel like it's coming along really well and I know the ending; please bear with me as I'm sure you'll be impressed. That's all I can say. I fear giving too much away if I say a lot more.

Thanks as always for your thoughts; you know they mean a lot to me.

Hmmm...something still doesn't smell right here....

Icy Blues:

You did such a cool job of this story. :) I loved how you did Gerard's character, switching back and forth between personalities. I can't wait to find out what happens, at first I thought Lucy would leave Gerard but now I'm not so sure. Thanks so much for telling me about this story, I'm going to subscribe. :D

Not a problem hun. Thank you so much for your comment. Glad you're enjoying it so far.

You did such a cool job of this story. :) I loved how you did Gerard's character, switching back and forth between personalities. I can't wait to find out what happens, at first I thought Lucy would leave Gerard but now I'm not so sure. Thanks so much for telling me about this story, I'm going to subscribe. :D