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  • MCRLUCY

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    *waves hand* I have a question: didn't Lucy make arrangements for Sarah to contact someone in order to "save" her from Gerard?
    No, not strictly so. Lucy was going to phone Sarah later on on the evening that she broke free, but if you read, you'll understand that Lucy has almost forgot about Sarah in the last couple of days, which is why she phoned her on Christmas Eve and had to leave a message because she wasn't available. It'll all come together, believe me. They say patience is a virtue and the story is really coming on now.

    Thanks as always for your comment and I'm sorry if I have confused things or lost the thread a litle. Please keep with me.

    Naughty
    July 19th, 2008 at 04:40pm
  • mcrmom

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    *waves hand* I have a question: didn't Lucy make arrangements for Sarah to contact someone in order to "save" her from Gerard?
    July 18th, 2008 at 08:37pm
  • mcrmom

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    Lovely darling. At least Gerard's somewhat back in touch with reality, at this point at least. Very good chapter! Hope your Nan is doing well.
    July 9th, 2008 at 11:06pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    Awesome update :D I'm so glad that Sarah got out of this alive. It'll be interesting to see where this goes from here :D
    June 26th, 2008 at 01:29am
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    :o CLIFF HANGER... it was a good one though, I'll give you that :D

    That was an awesome, action packed and suspenseful chapter.
    I can't wait for your next update :D
    June 19th, 2008 at 04:04am
  • mcrmom

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    Poor duckling...you must've been over-served during your party. Tsk tsk.

    Hey, did that scene sound like The Shining much? Those poor girls.
    June 19th, 2008 at 01:25am
  • Lightning Zap

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    :o Lucy's so mentally strong! I loved it when she called Gerard a fruitcake :XD
    It's great how she was able to stand up for herself and defend herself.
    And Gerard is such a freak... he's really psycho. I love it :D
    Can't wait for more :D

    Zap <333
    June 13th, 2008 at 02:29pm
  • Heatharrrrgh

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    o.O

    I demand an update!
    Another amazing update Lucy! :]]
    June 1st, 2008 at 01:09am
  • Lightning Zap

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    Ooooh. Gerard is really sick and twisted in this one. He's gonna kill the friend!
    I cannot wait for an update on this story. I do really like it :D
    May 30th, 2008 at 03:50pm
  • broken.eternity

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    interesting..
    May 27th, 2008 at 08:00am
  • Lightning Zap

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    :o This is so good! Your writing is perfect. I don't have any con-crit to give you. And the storyline is great. I love this idea of Gerard the psycho killer! It's awesome! I cannot wait to read more of this story **subscribes**.
    May 24th, 2008 at 01:39pm
  • Mastermind.

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    I am so caught up in this... I really, really want to know what happens next. XD

    *is in love* In Love

    <3
    May 17th, 2008 at 03:17pm
  • Heatharrrrgh

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    *jaw drops(
    I was seriously not expecting that xD
    xXx
    May 17th, 2008 at 01:54am
  • mcrmom

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    So what's up with this intruder guy??? Was he just upset not to find Lucy home when he got there, or what?
    May 16th, 2008 at 11:25pm
  • mcrmom

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    Wow...freaky.
    May 16th, 2008 at 05:38pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    mcrmom:
    OK...so this is someone she knows? Pretty weird. I like it so far. Keep on, and I hope your Nan is alright (mine is nearly 95 and still living in her own house).
    Thanks Mom; love ya!
    May 16th, 2008 at 11:57am
  • MCRLUCY

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    LIQUID LIVES.:
    I loved it - totally unexpected, and... yeah. I really, really love this.

    You've really caught the atmosphere amazingly; the description, again, is awesome.

    And thanks about the signature, hahaha. (:
    Love always <3
    Thank you, thank you, thank you!
    May 16th, 2008 at 11:53am
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    Heatharrrrgh:
    Well shit me!
    I actually gasped at that xD
    Love it, as always :)

    Now as you can see, I rarely comment stories, but I always make a point of commenting on your updates, :D
    xXx
    Ha ha ha ha ha.

    Thanks, as always, to you hun. You know how to brighten my day with your comments and I know you always comment me; that's why I LOVE YOU LOADS!
    May 16th, 2008 at 11:52am
  • Mastermind.

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    I loved it - totally unexpected, and... yeah. I really, really love this.

    You've really caught the atmosphere amazingly; the description, again, is awesome.

    And thanks about the signature, hahaha. (:
    Love always <3
    May 16th, 2008 at 12:24am
  • Heatharrrrgh

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    Well shit me!
    I actually gasped at that xD
    Love it, as always :)

    Now as you can see, I rarely comment stories, but I always make a point of commenting on your updates, :D
    xXx
    May 15th, 2008 at 11:30pm