Arranged Marriage - Comments

@ ladywolf89
I like to try and take things are a reasonable pace. I'm so very glad you enjoyed it. Writing is my passion and I don't think I will ever lose that! Working on a novel right now! Thanks for the feedback!!

I loved how you showed his character change slowly and normally rather than all at once. I hope that you keep writing more and have as much fun as you did while writing this one. I used to not like Loki before this story but now I think he is kind of an ok god. Thanks.

@ powerofkisses
For a second I thought you totally hated me with the first half of your comment. I'm glad that's not the case. I'm happy you enjoyed it! I hope you might come to like something else I've written too.

You are the only person that has made me think Loki is a total assface. Wonderful job :) I loved reading every second of this story

@ Jayme112234
Thank you very much! Happy you enjoyed it from beginning to end. Hope you'll join me for the next one one Oct 29th.

Completely loved this story and I loved the ending xxx

@ Yasumi
Don't misunderstand. I absolutely loved Tom Hiddlston as Loki. But there are so many writers that take the wounded animal puppy thing and make that all he is. But he isn't. Just like Thor isn't all sweet reformed good guy.

Awww a son can't wait to see what happens next xxx

@ besilent
Jane and Thor's relationship is sad but I wanted something different for this fic. Thor will find his happiness someday. As for Loki he's grown since this all began. :)

Aww, yay! I'm glad Loki changed his mind about having a child (: I feel bad about Thor and Jane though..

@ Miss Independant
Well thank you very much! I'm so happy you think so!

Unreal storyline, well written and very engaging! x

Unreal storyline, well written and very engaging! x

@ Jayme112234
Yeah. I wanted something different for Thor and Jane then what I have written before. Glad you like the idea of pregnancy. We'll see what happens. :P

It's a shame about Thor and Jane but I'm excited about the idea of Loki and Ceph having a baby together x

@ allicoleman
Thank you so much! I'm glad you think so and are enjoying this fic!

Easily one of the best stories I've read on this site. I think I cried and smiled so much while reading this. I also read this entire story all today. Fantastic! Please update soon!

@ Priests-Glytch
I really don't see Loki as the weepy type for the most part. I see him as more stubborn. Even when he found out who he really was he cried but he mostly yelled and seemed to get over it pretty quickly. He didn't just sit in a corner and feel bad for himself. :P

My Loki isn't like Tom's Loki. I try to get as close to the character as possible and for the most part I seem to do a pretty good job according to my readers. :)

It makes me feel good though knowing that so many feel I do a good job. It give me motivation I continue on and I do so love to write. Pretty sure I've become addicted.

@ Yasumi
I am indeed. I like that you are actually starting it off with Loki being petulant and mean. Most people just make him mopey and weepy right off

@ mauikismet
Believe it or not I have spaces between them but when I paste them from my writing application to this website and even Fanfiction.net for some reason it changes my format. My paragraphs usually are tab'd in for the beginning as well. :(
I actually hate how it looks on these pages myself. I'll see if I can make time to manually edit after I paste it to the website. Because I post to three different sites I don't always have time mixed with my real life. I will see what I can do.
I'm glad you are enjoying the story despite that though. :)