October 19th, 2013 at 09:21pm
Arranged Marriage - Comments
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Hey! Great story! With the format though, I tend to have a hard time reading it because I get lost on which line I was reading. Would it be possible to put an extra line of space between paragraphs?October 19th, 2013 at 08:04pm
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I sense trouble brewing... glad that Loki shared something with Ceph xxxOctober 19th, 2013 at 07:57pm
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@ babygurl94512
It is a very refreshing improvement from how it all began. :)October 19th, 2013 at 07:11pm -
@ Priests-Glytch
Yeah I know what you mean. I kick myself often for typo's or just getting important names wrong in general. Thanks for letting me know! Hope you're enjoying.October 19th, 2013 at 07:11pm -
yay
such an improvement in the relationship
can't wait for more
loooove it!!October 18th, 2013 at 11:02pm -
And trust me I understand. I typo so hard some timesOctober 18th, 2013 at 09:52pm
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The first one and I think in the second :)October 18th, 2013 at 09:52pm
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@ besilent
Yay! Happy I've caught your attention!October 18th, 2013 at 09:34am -
@ Amanda-Renee
I feel the love!!! Awesome to hear it!October 18th, 2013 at 09:34am -
Oh I just sat and read the whole thing, well so far, haha. But I love it!! Subscribed.October 18th, 2013 at 03:13am
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I absolutely love this story! ♡October 18th, 2013 at 02:20am
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@ Priests-Glytch
Crude...thought I fixed that. Which chapter was that?October 17th, 2013 at 08:43am -
@ reokohoshi
There will be more. :) I post everyday. HeheOctober 17th, 2013 at 08:43am -
Jotunhiem****October 17th, 2013 at 05:17am
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I need more! I loved this!October 17th, 2013 at 04:20am
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I need more! I loved this!October 17th, 2013 at 04:20am
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@ Jayme112234
Everyone got a little good advice there. :)October 16th, 2013 at 05:35pm -
Loved the chapter and that her sister gave her some good advice xxxOctober 15th, 2013 at 07:00pm
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@ babygurl94512
They certainly have their work cut out for them.October 15th, 2013 at 06:42pm
I thought it was time for him to open up. :P