Natural Born Killer - Comments

This is genius. Loved it so much... gripped my heart, and I shed a little tear when it finished. ❤️

Love ittt!!!!!!!

I love happy endings and this one was perfect. Thank you for this story. And I'm looking forward to the mini prequels - I hope you can do them! Especially for Brian and Faith.

YOU.

OH YOU.

Doing the wedding/shooting as a dream was genius. I was literally holding my breath when she was shot! Not that I thought she would die, I knew you wouldn't do that, but still. I'm so glad they're both okay. And I loved this chapter!

I'm so in love with this story! And I can't wait til you start working on open fire

THIS WAS PERFECT! And so worth the wait! I'm excited for the wedding

Awww, Jimmy and Gaia are having a babba!

Larry, you just got owned, my friend. That was awesome. You do write awesome lines for Matt to say when he's telling people off.

I can't wait for the ceremony, it's going to be so sweet. But I'm sad the end is coming. D:

Awesome chapter! :D

Larry got told. How do you always, always, always write the most perfect smack downs ever. It's maddening! And I am so happy that Jimmy and Gaia are going to have a baby! Loved this update so much, thanks for updating!

A BABY GIRL! I'm so happy, and I love this chapter so much. And also. You probably already know how excited I am about there being 4 stories to go along with this BUT HOLY MOSES I CAN'T WAIT. THEY'RE ALL GOING TO BE FABULOUS!

@ fairjer0620
Oh cool, I'll go read it now! :D

@ rachthebat.
The first chapter of that very sorry was just posted and it is now linked in natural born killer. Hope it doesn't disappoint.

@ rachthebat.
The first chapter of that very sorry was just posted and it is now linked in natural born killer. Hope it doesn't disappoint.

I was just about to say, I'd love to read more about Jimmy and Gaia, haha. Great minds think alike!

Aww, such a sweet chapter. I'm so glad that mum and baby are doing fine, I can already tell that Matt is going to be an amazing daddy! :D

I'm so glad that Audrey and the baby are safe! Jesus! Chapter 21 nearly killed my emotions! XD

Thank the gods that Dryden is finally dead! Yay for cute fluff though! :D

WEEEE! Such a cute chapter! So, so, so glad that Audrey and the baby are okay, and that the danger is finally over.

CARMINE, YOU BUGGER. I don't trust him. I don't trust him at all. But thank the Lord that Dryden is dead, I did a happy dance in my head when that happened haha. Please don't let them lose the baby though! That would just break my heart.

@ CutiePiePink15
I'm sorry! I had so much to fit in and I didn't want it to drag out! BUT! You may still see something yet. Thanks for reading!

Why wasn't there a wedding chapter?!

Have to know what happens next!! Great update!

OH THANK GOD. Not that I wouldn't love to read more drama in this story (you know how much I love drama) but if the plan were to backfire and something happened to Audrey or Matt, it would break my heart. I love the direction it's going, I can't wait to read what happens next! And just so you know, I think a spin off with Brian and Faith would be absolutely perfect! I'll even beg you to do it if I have to! I AM NOT AFRAID