April 8th, 2014 at 01:09am
Natural Born Killer - Comments
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Those effing idiots. They may have managed to break into the compound and get inside the house, but they were stupid to believe they'd actually get out. Our men are not to be messed with or underestimated! I don't blame Matt for sending Audrey away, he wants to make sure that she and the baby stay safe. But it's going to backfire, isn't it? Of course it is. And who was he talking to on the phone? I NEED TO KNOW. SOON. VERY SOON. PRETTY PLEASEApril 8th, 2014 at 12:21am
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Oh my god, oh my god! Who is that on the end of the phone?!
More, please! XDApril 7th, 2014 at 07:20pm -
OH NO.
OHNOOHNOOHNO. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.April 6th, 2014 at 03:00am -
Awesome chapter, Taylor and McKenna really told that skank, huh? XD Loved it! Tension was right, jesus christ, anymore sexual tension between Ashley and Taylor and they'd be powering the whole of California! Haha.
"Sit your ass down and shut the fuck up." Hell YES! He's so hot when he's in the moods XDMarch 15th, 2014 at 07:10pm -
McKenna and Taylor perfection but damn rough Ashley me likeyMarch 15th, 2014 at 04:36pm
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HAHA! Taylor and Mckenna are bloody perfect. Thank you for the update!March 15th, 2014 at 07:36am
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Just started reading this morning, and I am in love!! I love gang stories, this is so effing good!
Matt is just..ashdjashdksahd there are no words! Haha. I loved the chapter with Brian getting all angry and violent, so hot, which I don't know what that says about me haha, but whatever XD
I LOVE Taylor! She's awesome! Can't wait to see the "tension" between her and Ashley!
More soon, please and thank you! :DMarch 7th, 2014 at 08:51pm -
Dangerous Synyster is dangerous. I love him when he's all angry and violent and stuff. And I love Taylor, can I just say? Thank you for updating so soon, I almost squealed! <3March 6th, 2014 at 06:26am
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@ pawnsinplay
Next chappy is good. Scary. Good. It'll be up soon so keep an eye out. son as in tonight. ♡March 6th, 2014 at 02:54am -
Oh. Oh. OH MY GOSH. Can't wait for more drama! Also, love that you out Taylor Momsen in this!March 6th, 2014 at 02:01am
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PREGNANT! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM! But oh God, it's gonna get scary soon, isn't it?January 9th, 2014 at 04:29am
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yay baby is on the way!! but something tells me there is going to be more drama with terry soon...January 9th, 2014 at 03:38am
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I have a feeling this trip isn't going to go as planned...Please update soon!December 29th, 2013 at 05:35am
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holy shite matt is truly scary and ingenious.... LOVE IT!!December 29th, 2013 at 05:15am
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Well. Thank you for letting me know about the added bit. Just made the chapter even more fabulous!December 4th, 2013 at 03:26am
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@ brady07
@ Alice Verney
@ pawnsinplay
Thanks! Don't know if you noticed though, I had to edit the last chapter a bit. I'd started it on my computer, then my husbands crapped out on him and he had to take mine on his four day trip so I completely forgot about the bit I had written before he'd left. Most of chapter 13 was written up on my phone. I've added on to the ending so its got a big chunk you'll probably want to check out.December 4th, 2013 at 02:51am -
omg pleeeeease keep updating! I love this story so much :)))December 4th, 2013 at 01:51am
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Thank God they're all okay! Thank you for updating so soon :P Loved this!December 4th, 2013 at 01:32am
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yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy sorta happy ending ish..... the boys and the girls are ok thats all that mattersDecember 4th, 2013 at 12:58am
I will be honest when I say that I thought about making it all backfire. Draw it out more and give them even more drama. But I'm not going to. At least not for Matt and Audrey. Though I'm not saying it isn't out of the question for another major character or Characters to have something to deal with. I'm working on the next chapter right now so it'll be up in the next day or so. I have to say, now that I'm down to the last few chapters or so everything seems to be flowing pretty freely. Also, a short 3 or so chapter spin off with Brian and Faith is not out of the question. I'm playing ideas overt in my head right now.