Natural Born Killer - Comments

@ pawnsinplay
I will be honest when I say that I thought about making it all backfire. Draw it out more and give them even more drama. But I'm not going to. At least not for Matt and Audrey. Though I'm not saying it isn't out of the question for another major character or Characters to have something to deal with. I'm working on the next chapter right now so it'll be up in the next day or so. I have to say, now that I'm down to the last few chapters or so everything seems to be flowing pretty freely. Also, a short 3 or so chapter spin off with Brian and Faith is not out of the question. I'm playing ideas overt in my head right now.

Those effing idiots. They may have managed to break into the compound and get inside the house, but they were stupid to believe they'd actually get out. Our men are not to be messed with or underestimated! I don't blame Matt for sending Audrey away, he wants to make sure that she and the baby stay safe. But it's going to backfire, isn't it? Of course it is. And who was he talking to on the phone? I NEED TO KNOW. SOON. VERY SOON. PRETTY PLEASE

Oh my god, oh my god! Who is that on the end of the phone?!

More, please! XD

OH NO.

OHNOOHNOOHNO. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Awesome chapter, Taylor and McKenna really told that skank, huh? XD Loved it! Tension was right, jesus christ, anymore sexual tension between Ashley and Taylor and they'd be powering the whole of California! Haha.

"Sit your ass down and shut the fuck up." Hell YES! He's so hot when he's in the moods XD

McKenna and Taylor perfection but damn rough Ashley me likey

HAHA! Taylor and Mckenna are bloody perfect. Thank you for the update!

Just started reading this morning, and I am in love!! I love gang stories, this is so effing good!

Matt is just..ashdjashdksahd there are no words! Haha. I loved the chapter with Brian getting all angry and violent, so hot, which I don't know what that says about me haha, but whatever XD

I LOVE Taylor! She's awesome! Can't wait to see the "tension" between her and Ashley!

More soon, please and thank you! :D

Dangerous Synyster is dangerous. I love him when he's all angry and violent and stuff. And I love Taylor, can I just say? Thank you for updating so soon, I almost squealed! <3

@ pawnsinplay
Next chappy is good. Scary. Good. It'll be up soon so keep an eye out. son as in tonight. ♡

Oh. Oh. OH MY GOSH. Can't wait for more drama! Also, love that you out Taylor Momsen in this!

PREGNANT! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM! But oh God, it's gonna get scary soon, isn't it?

yay baby is on the way!! but something tells me there is going to be more drama with terry soon...

I have a feeling this trip isn't going to go as planned...Please update soon!

holy shite matt is truly scary and ingenious.... LOVE IT!!

Well. Thank you for letting me know about the added bit. Just made the chapter even more fabulous!

@ brady07

@ Alice Verney

@ pawnsinplay
Thanks! Don't know if you noticed though, I had to edit the last chapter a bit. I'd started it on my computer, then my husbands crapped out on him and he had to take mine on his four day trip so I completely forgot about the bit I had written before he'd left. Most of chapter 13 was written up on my phone. I've added on to the ending so its got a big chunk you'll probably want to check out.

omg pleeeeease keep updating! I love this story so much :)))

Thank God they're all okay! Thank you for updating so soon :P Loved this!

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy sorta happy ending ish..... the boys and the girls are ok thats all that matters