I completely agree with @ zildjianrocker! This Billie is definitely something else. Mysterious (to the point where I was even a little scared of him in the beginning :P), outspoken and so unpredictable! You really have no idea what he's gonna do next and it adds so much excitement to this story. So just keep doing what you do, cause you do it incredibly well and I can't wait for the smut to start ;) Though I'm not entirely sure if my ovaries will be able to handle it. haha
I love it! You are such a talented storyteller. I really like Annabelle's character and the way you are portraying Billie in this, it's different to the way you have written his character before. Can't wait for more, hope for an update soon!! :)
I'm really enjoying this! Its sad, but I like the way you describe Billie's melancholy behavior. Also, thanks for portraying his delightful middle age...ness. :) Ps: Happy early birthday, have a great one!