The Fast Times - Comments

We'll, Crystal sure made that easy. I loved Andy's initial carelessness as he walked in, and I am glad Rae shut the door in Darla

Oh my gosh, Pete's piercings hahaha. I'm happy they're finally on the same page feelings-wise, though I'm still nervous about what's going to happen with Crystal...

Not gonna lie, I read this a few hours ago but didn't have the energy/time to comment. But excellent, I'm glad Pete and Nancy are on the same page! I loved the little sexytime they had ;D Also glad you made it back to Chicago safely!!

@ sodapop curtis
I'm tying up loose ends, I'm gonna bring up a lot of stuff that was kinda left behind

even after all those years Darla still expected stuff out of Nancy. Typical

It's funny, I was actually thinking today that it would be cool if Darla and Norman came back; not necessarily to make up with her or anything specific, but just a brief appearance for their characters to come full circle, so I'm glad you put them in this chapter! I'm interested to see if they come back...

Also now I'm kind of conflicted on whether or not Pete and Cy should be together. They seem okay when they're not together, but they're also really cute when they are...I think as long as they're civil and with Holly, I'll be happy. :)

Oh my lord. I am so sorry I had been away from this story for so long. I missed it. <3 holly is adorable, omg. I hope Pete and Nancy get back together, but I want the horrible, long, dragging sexual tension to be there bc Pete deserves to wait. Crystal would never stand the chance

I want them to fall in love with each other over again and not just because they want to make the Holly situation easier. Pete needs to work things out with Crystal though before he lets anything happen with Nancy. I don't know I want this to end happily and I want Nancy to realize Pete's everything she wants and that he's happy being with her in Chicago and she shouldn't feel like she took away his future.

Aww, I'm so glad Peter's finally come around :') Obviously I want Pete and Nancy to end up together but let this whole Crystal situation smooth itself out first and go from there.

@ bullets.
I'm not sure unless I come up with an epic cliffhanger, but hey if you get a need to read more Pete stories I've got a ton of them
It's okay if you don't comment consistently, I don't ever know what to comment on stories I read too

This is such a great story. I've just never had the right words to express how much I like it, so I kind of stay silent. I can't wait to see how you end this- Do you think there'll be a sequel?

So long as Crystal is gone I really don't mind how it ends. I'm not sure if Pete and Nancy should get back together. If they do they have to want each other if it's solely for Holly then it won't work. They both need to really think

Ugh don't ask me how I want this to end obviously I want them to be together so Holly has both her parents in her life and I want Crystal to disappear and for Nancy to open her clothing store or smoke shop so she and Pete can buy a house and Andy Pete Patrick and Joe can start a band and everyone can live happily ever after except Crystal haha.

I loved how Pete's dad apologized, it made me feel fuzzy and I'm glad he wants to meet Holly :)

I'm glad you're going back to Chicago, you deserve to be happy. As for this story, I'll be sad to see it go, but I'm really excited to see how it will end and how things with Crystal and Pete and Nancy are going to go because obviously I want Nancy and Pete to be together forever but you're the judge of that ;D

Sad this is coming to an end so soon. I''ve really eenjoyed it

I really like this, sorry I haven't been commenting since I disappeared off of Mibba. I'll read anything you want to write!

I still really don't like Crystal

i feel weird badmouthing anyone named crystal because that's my best friend's name, but i think this is an exception. god damn, she needs to GO.

I just finally got caught up, oh my god I've been so bad with reading lately! Crystal absolutely needs to go, she can't be around Holly! I'm in love with Holly oh my god is she perfect. I can't wait for more!

Right now that I've got that out. How funny was Holly not accepting Pete at first lol. I can't wait until Holly gets to meet Pete's family, but I really really don't want Crystal to be there, she needs to go