The Fast Times - Comments

@ silk tea.
Thanks, I changed her name later on and tried to change it in the other chapters, must've missed that one

I just read the prologue and I like the idea behind this a lot though it kind of reads very monotonously. Like it's just feels like all actions in some parts like 'Pete did this. Pete didn't like this. He also did this." you know? Also you have Nancy with two different last names. Once you list her as Nancy Moore in the first paragraph and then Nancy Durden in the fourth. :)

:-( poor Pete

holy shit, i wasn't expecting any of that. i really loved the scene with peter. you write him as the bad guy really well, and my heart was aching when cy was forced to lie to pete :(

It doesn't matter how many times I think about it, it always annoys me that healthcare and stuffs not free over there.

Erin is now named Uber Bitch. I hope it all settles down soon

@ lady_enigma
Well you know me, I love drama

Im glad they spoke. It's just going to be a rocky road for them isnt it?

and we've all reached breaking point

Im sorry but who can blame Pete? he got pushed to his limit

I really hope what Chip is saying isnt true. If I was Pete I'd have reacted the same way

not rushing, is good. It's good that you're taking your time to show the support network Nancy has around her

Oh my god I can't tell you how good this is!! It amazing!! And all the emotions and conflict, Ali you're just getting better and better.

Yeah mama Wentz is stepping in! Show that bitch Darla who's boss!

As horrible as this sounds, I think a DNA test should be done just to shut everybody up.

Nancy doesnt need Darla in her life, I'm glad Dale is there

As horrible as this sounds, I think a DNA test should be done just to shut everybody up.

Nancy doesnt need Darla in her life, I'm glad Dale is there

I really really do not like Darla and Norman. Mainly Darla.

I really really do not like Darla and Norman. Mainly Darla.

His dad is really grating my nerves. I understand how important it is to have him acting that way in the story though. It really makes the story seem real and shows how much of a mess babies really can cause for young parents. This story is very intense and very good. I cannot wait for the update.

I hope his dad comes round soon