I suspected that Alma was gonna die but I will admit i wasn't prepared for it...Very rarely do any fanfictions get any real emotions from me but I cried...I really did. :) I love this story!
oh no, i feel so bad for nancy :( though i kinda saw it coming since alma was so old.
i just wanna say that pete's parents in this story are exactly like my parents. my dad is harsh and mean and unforgiving and would have definitely kicked me out if i got pregnant in high school, whereas my mom is the sweetest woman on earth and would defend me no matter what i did. i guess the point of this message is, you rule at making relatable characters and personalities. keep on keepin' on, gurl.
It's good that Petes mom is letting him pick up some clothes. I hope something good happens for them soon, but I have a funny feeling about Alma's cold....
I'm really starting to feel hopeful for nancy an pete, I was really worried at first about them and their individual lives, but I think this experience will make them realize as a team they are unstoppable. And I LOVE the names.... Fight club is amazing. I'm really excited to see what you do with this. :)
I just read this entire story in like an hour, and I'm in love with it!! I hope everything works out for them, I want Nancy to be in love with Pete so bad it almost hurts, and I want Pete to stop being so perfect