Make a Wish When a Blackbird Flies - Comments

Hope you feel better. This was great. I'm appalled how could they do that to such a young boy.Glad he finally got out

Hope you feel better. This was great. I'm appalled how could they do that to such a young boy.Glad he finally got out

I hope your migraine went away. This was wondeful, as always, and I am excited to find out what is in store for the characters in present day.

This is just amazing , i recently had a dream being locked in a psychiatric hospital and it was horrible so wow.. Your story is good :)

Ahh this is amazing.

I have no words. This is just magnificent.

this is amazing, and its probably one of my favourites. The most recent chapter made me feel sick, but it was still really good >~<

I, personally, think it was another great chapter. You are a great writer, and I am keeping my promise of leaving a comment after each update.

As always this was another wonderful and brilliant chapter. I love this story so much and think it is amazing that you came up with something so great.

I think it's amazing don't listen to whoever that person was. I really like your story and I bet a bunch of others too. You're not mental either you just have an imagination that goes beyond anyone would dare to. Keep updating please. :))

As always this is so, so good <3 I'm super nervous for Frank to be away from Gerard, it isn't safe for him to be somewhere where there's a lunatic - in the carnival, no less, who knows that Frank has been hanging out with Gerard. I'm so eager to see how this all plays out, this is so brilliant :))

I'm starting to understand this now which is good. The story is clever too:3 so far, I've got that gerard was the guy who took the nightmares away, matt is the same matt who was in the asylum who supposedly died but didn't (the bully) and now he's gerards partner. Nate is the killer which is why he didn't want gerard hanging around with Frank. Anyway. Can't waiitt!! Xxo

NOoooooooooooo~ cliffhanger. GAD DAMNIT.
;-; you made frank leave the hotel before Matt went ;-;-;-;;-;';-; I think that when frank sees matt hes gonna be all like AGSDKDIHALIAHFAKHDKFUCKKKKKK.
Update soon :33

@ Butterflyprincess2
Thanks that really means alot

i can't wait to see where this goes.

More people should leave comments. You deserve more than just me telling you how great your story is, but I will continue to make sure that you have at least one per chapter from now on.

@ Butterflyprincess2
I actually applauded when I red it. Good job

What kind of dismal cyclone of chaos lives in your brain that persuaded you to write such a demented story of torture? Only someone who is completely mental could think of this, not to mention the fact that you believed it a good idea to post it for public viewing. Just because you think up such horrors does not give you the right to traumatize the minds of the innocent with your soulless creation.

I don't want to actually be mean, so I am going to provide my actual thoughts first. I can't resist the challenge though, so the insult will be put next. I absolutely love this story and the way it is coming along. You are a brilliant writer.

dude woah, so intense! (this fic is going to my reclist i dont want to forget the name and die inside)
Anyhow I LOVE IT.