O.K is just a quick way of writing okay as far as I'm aware. Just to let you know, sweaty and sweetie are different words. Sweaty is when you sweat too much, I think sweetie is the term of endearment that you're looking for :). Very good chapter and a really interesting story so far. Can't wait to read more :)
This is story is showing so much potential and even though it's just began I like it...a lot! I just wonder if Frank is going to die or if his fate will be changed by someone (saving him).
WOW WOW WOW!!! I just read the last two chapters, my goodness. Chapter two was absolutely amazing. The little "Ladies, hold your orgasms" bit when Gerard smirked was the best part! I got actual chills when Frank brought out the death card. It was so real, so intense, and Gerard could tell right then that none of Frank's act was a gimmick or a joke.
And um, chapter three!!!! We get to read Frank's back story, it was perfect. I loved the fact that he was so young when he found out that he had the gift, and you introduced it perfectly TWICE- to MRS. WAY HERSELF. I love that Gerard and Frank are somehow connected and I hope they realize it soon. It's sort of like serendipity!!!
I have to say once again how much I utterly love this story so far. You have something so amazing here, I love every bit of it SO MUCH!!! More whenever you get the chance, please :)))
Poor Frank I would hate to have premonitions about the future especially ones about my own death but then again if he does doesn't that mean he can change what he does in the future so it doesn't get him killed
I love this, it's really good so far :D the idea for the story seems fucking genius, really original. I don't think I've ever read a frerard like this before. Can't wait for the next update!
Oh my... This... That chapter... Just... WOW. The description and buildup of Frank's character was absolutely incredible. Then Gerard, I can picture him so perfectly. Then that ENDING! I'm absolutely intrigued and I just wanted to say congrats on a perfect first chapter. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for these characters, and us! <3
This story is fantastic!!! (and if I'm reading IN ENGLISH is necessarily so) You are a born writer my friend! One day I will enter into a bookstore to buy your book! I'm sure! (or, like Petronio, scuar, gherl, scuar! xD ) Continues to write and never stop! This is your way Cath and nothing should stop you and I seriously, don't think that I'm kidding okay?! Signing off Step P.S. I hope that my English is good :P