Garden of Shadows - Comments

@ josephinekane
Wow thanks for you kind words. Your words even generated/inspired thoughts on Barsad's attraction to Cosette in the chapter I'm writing now. I feel more responsible for the Tommy fiction because of the numbers.

With that being said I've been working on the second chapter for this fiction for the past month. This chapter per another commenters suggestion will be told from Barsad's POV. My thought was to have all three different perspectives of origin of the triangle before I bring the story to present day. To avoid telling the same tale multiple times I'm trying to mingle so once we have Cosette's there will be a complete picture.

Glad you stumbled into this story.

I like the story so far, but as much as I like the thought of Barsard's obvious attraction, it feels more hero worship for something so pure, I'd like Bane to fall in love with her, I know, I'm a shameless romantic! x Love your Tommy fic too xxx

I like the story so far, but as much as I like the thought of Barsard's obvious attraction, it feels more hero worship for something so pure, I'd like Bane to fall in love with her, I know, I'm a shameless romantic! x Love your Tommy fic too xxx

@ zabetheliza79
Great, can't wait. Go with Barsad. Your story, of course, just making my suggestion. :) I love Barsad when he's well written.

@ amw84
Thanks for the encouragement. I will post the next chapter soon. The narrative will be either Barsad, or Cosette's I haven't decided yet.

very nice!

I liked it. Please continue! It's well written and the story line is interesting. I'm ccurious to see how Bane's relationship will develop, considering how innocently the bond started. I liked the Hocus Pokus song too! Always thought it sounded pretty.