The Irony is That This Cell Phone Has Gone Through Dante's Inferno and Back and Still Looks Better Than You - Comments

The Maze Runner was just omg.
Eragon is just asdfghjkl.
Eragon has a really good plot (albeit a little cliche) about this guy and a dragon and an evil king and a secret race and etc

@ sirius amory.
I have to read The Scorch Trials, it's on my list. Is Eragon good? I tried reading it when I was I think ten? Didn't work out too well. My attention span stretched to five minutes on a good day.

I've been wanting to read this for like since it came out omg
I have to finish Eragon and The Scorch Trials first LOL

@ sirius amory.

Divergent is my favorite in the series but I'm not joking when I say that Allegiant is heart-breaking. The series as a whole is so good though and explores some really deep themes and has this ability to leave an impact on a person, y'know? Not many things are able to do that.

I wish you l u c k

My mum just got me Divergent I am t h r i l l e d

@ sirius amory.

Me either. I mean it takes a lot to get worked up like that and I usually don't get to that point. Tfios and Allegiant are literally the only two exceptions.

TFIOS

That was the only book ever that actually made me cry like I never cry that aint my thing

@ sirius amory.
That is my favorite book in existence and when the movie comes out I'll probably be first in line with a custom-made tissue box

The Fault in Our Stars, though.

Cool
Thanks ~

@ sirius amory.

omg yeah totally

Hi thur.
Can I review this?
Thanks. ~

I can tell you bases it off of someone, because the character is true, likable, and noticeably original, it makes your writing stand out :)

@ Writer in the Rye
omg thank you so much! Natalia's mom is actually based a little bit off my grandma. She's really into the evil eye and warding off spirits and stuff. It's pretty funny tbh

Happy Mibbaween!

First I must say I really like the name Natalia, I've never heard it before. You describe things from an abstract mindset and you're exactly the writer I wish to be. I haven't said that to anyone on this site before, so congrats on being the first :) As an example:
"She was a girl misplaced, the extra piece to a puzzle that was already finished." ugh. share some of your talent with me please, that'd be great xD

I love your layout and your chapter titles as well, it fits the theme of your story perfectly. Her mom sounds interesting and I'm very interested to see more in depth what Natalia's relationship with her culture is like, of course I'm only on Chapter Two though so I'm sure I'll find out soon :) This was phenomenal!!

You're extremely gifted.

God Bless!!

xoxo

The movie was amazing but heartcrushingly sad at the same time. :c
I'm going to put a dog in Manmaker & see how long he lasts.

@ insanetrain
ahhhhh thank you! I'm going to try to write the happy and the sad in equal measure. I didn't want to kill Snow White :(

@ twisted logic.
I didn't plan on going the Marley and Me route (that book and movie destroyed me) but you know what they say, the dog always dies (actually I don't know if they say that. But a lot of books that have a dog, usually kill the dog. It's probably a conspiracy.)

This is amazing. AND SO SAD OHMYGOSH NOOO SNOW WHITE DX

MOTHER FUCK I THOUGHT THIS WOULDN'T BE MARLEY AND ME BUT IT WAS
IT WAS
/cry