The Irony is That This Cell Phone Has Gone Through Dante's Inferno and Back and Still Looks Better Than You - Comments

oh i can believe it.
((omg Mibba actually needs a like/dislike button))

@ twisted logic.

if u can believe it, things may or may not get worse

i make no promises

((side note: my first reaction was to favorite your comment I'm hard-wired for twitter))

The freaking updates.
reblog if u crie evrytim.

@ twisted logic.
Ah thank you so much! I got really bored in my study hall the other day and started writing little stuff about new characters. It helps when I'm blocked on everything else. And omg thanks about the profile picture

And I'm really glad you pointed out the thing about the quotes, I always forget exactly what I need to do and you made it a lot clearer than most of my English teachers have

Comment virginity = mine.
O M G. I don't even know what this is but I adore it. The title, the fact that it's about a gaggle of little kids & their play, the fact that the author's profile picture is the best one I've ever seen?
I love the simple nature of it & how short the chapters are.
However, I noticed that quotes tend to end like so;
"Hi." She said.
"Hi," She said.
If the punctuation is a comma then the pronoun's lowercase.
If it's a period, it's capitalised, like
"Hi," she said.
"Hi." She crossed her arms.
Just some concrit
Rec and sub to you!