I Won't Give Up - Comments

I have stalled for a long time to read this story! I am so glad I decided to keep reading, I hope you update soon!

I have stalled for a long time to read this story! I am so glad I decided to keep reading, I hope you update soon!

Please keep updating!!!

I love ur story keep it up updated soon i want to know more

Where have u been woman......poor Marcus, Aro is a dick, Caicus is still a pompous ass, who broke into the house can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Damn 9 months FLEW by!
This is going somewhere and I love hey and Jake so much!

way to go Savannah now thts how u tell people the fuck off and I'm glad tht her and Jacob r working out in a way and I'm glad tht he is patient with her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

That's what I was waiting for that telling off. She literally said everything she needed to say to Bella and Edward. Can't wait for more!

An amazing ending and story, Demetri and Savannah r goin to have a platonic relationship since she is mated to Jacob, I don't think the Voultri is goin to try and do anything stupid, can't wait to see ur new work in a month :) get ur education girly it's important :)

Yes you answered my questions thank you!
School is more import at (so they say lol), but chemistry is bitch to take in class too lol. I can't wait until you come back, you've ended a part or the story and now it's time to start you own stuff. I also like how even though you used breaking dawn you change it up a bit in your style.
You will be missed and can't wait!

@ bxgurl95
Hello!

Benjamin is part of the Egypt Coven along with Amun, Kebi, and Tia. Tia being his mate. Benjamin has the power to control elements. Demetri was once part of the Egypt coven before Chelsea changed her bond from Amun and Kebi to the Volturi. He was in the Egyptian coven long before Benjamin was changed.

What Savannah did was compel Demetri to no longer be loyal to the Volturi. It broke whatever Chelsea did to Demetri, but later on you'll see it does have a small effect of Demetri himself. She compelled Demetri because she realized, whether she liked it or not, Aro was going to take her back with her to Volterra so she needed to do something to make Demetri let her go.

If you need more explanation, let me know!

I couldn't put this down, I was so anxious reading this chapter. Can you explain how/why Demitri is no longer controlled? And also who Benjamin is? Thank you

Oh man I can't wait the drama is so crazy, I love Savannah's power more and more, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

That was fricken awesome!
Such a cliff hanger, but I LOVE IT
Ahhhh!!! I'll comment 6 million times

Yes

Love it, I hope u r goin by the book and no surpises like the movie did and hopefully Savannah and Alice stay with their family even tho Savannah doesn't like Bella, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Jacob stop fucking up dude seriously Bella's got a mate and so do u so when ur mate runs away pissed off u chase after her not stay behind and comfort Bella she is grown now, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

@ bxgurl95
Hello dearie! No I have more chapters. But, as I'm sure you've noticed, I've been going by the book. The last chapter that I use the book is chapter nine. After that i'm going to be writing my own scenes and such.
As for Savannah respecting Bella, as it'll show in the future, it wasn't respect as much as tolerating her for the sake of saving her family which includes Renesmee, meaning she's going to have to put up with Bella no matter her feels against her.

Hope this clears up some things!

Well... Kate was TRYING not to go easy on her but she complained about it, and now she wants to try and suck up to her. You mean this only have 3 more chapters?!??!?!?!? AH NO!
It's interesting because as much as Savannah detests Bella she still respects her to some degree and she isn't asking for people to abandon her she just wants her friends family (and Jacob) not to side with her automatically for everything. And Edward never apologized so what is he even trying to do. Grrr this is frustrating, I get where Savannah is coming from but at the same time I guess no one really asked for this. To be quite honest I hated Bella for the entire Twilight series ESPECIALLY when she got mad at Jacob for imprinting... that was the straw... but I digress.
Again, really REALLY happy that you're updating so quickly, it's very much appreciated. Can't wait for more

Not sure if I answered (I thought I did) but I feel like her anger towards Bella is justified in a way. I mean it isn't totally her fault it does fall to Edward but also the vampire chemistry, that is his blood singer. I feel like if she all of a sudden became Bella beat friend it'd be really fake. I mean she does have some real hurt and anger there and Bella has been the cause of a lot of grief.i loved the moment between Savannah and Jacob my heart swelled! So cute and they deserve it and just YES! Lol
More sexy time! ;) lol
Can't wait for more and these quick updates are awesome. You're back with a vengeance