I Won't Give Up - Comments

@ pbreyoung1996
Sorry about that! I just noticed that it wasn't linked, but I thought it was :/ It's called The Sweetest Dream Will Never Do.

It's linked to the story (:

might i ask what the prequel is called. i am certain it will make all the difference

@ pbreyoung1996
Hey!

I use the book a lot being it has everything to do with Savannah's life. I do my best to change it but i know if I change too much it'll be bad for the whole story. (Kinda how the movies ended up!) This story is going to be going past breaking dawn so it'll have a lot of my writing in it also.

This story is a sequel. Please read the prequel to understand why Savannah left(: Most likely, I'm hoping after Chapter 15, 17 the longest, it will be all of my writing!

@ pbreyoung1996
Hey!

I use the book a lot being it has everything to do with Savannah's life. I do my best to change it but i know if I change too much it'll be bad for the whole story. (Kinda how the movies ended up!) This story is going to be going past breaking dawn so it'll have a lot of my writing in it also.

This story is a sequel. Please read the prequel to understand why Savannah left(: Most likely, I'm hoping after Chapter 15, 17 the longest, it will be all of my writing!

@ pbreyoung1996
Hey!

I use the book a lot being it has everything to do with Savannah's life. I do my best to change it but i know if I change too much it'll be bad for the whole story. (Kinda how the movies ended up!) This story is going to be going past breaking dawn so it'll have a lot of my writing in it also.

This story is a sequel. Please read the prequel to understand why Savannah left(: Most likely, I'm hoping after Chapter 15, 17 the longest, it will be all of my writing!

i like this story but my only problem is that it is almost exactly like breaking dawn. the whole point of fanfiction is to take something and make it your own almost. I do enjoy the story with savannah though. I am curious about what all happened before she left. it is barely mentioned.

Savannah should never forgive Bella. I think she should get over it and move on but not forgive Bella.

I say savannah shouldnt forgive yet but dayum im liking it so far.

Eventually she should forgive Bella like maybe once hell freezes over or when Savannah and Jacob r back together and normal with no drama becuz being in love with ur enemy is drama enough so yeah once Savannah and Jacob r cool thn maybe she will forgive Bella after u kno she beats her ass and have a good talkin to as for Edward soon not now but soon anyhoo great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, damn Savannah is pissed off at Edward, Bella and Jacob, I just think tht her and Jacob needs to talk this shit out becuz whether she likes it or not thts her imprint and she is stuck with him for a long time until death and thts not goin to happen anytime soon so they need to sort out their issues and if it means she has to beat his ass till she gets tired thn so be it but they need to talk as for Bella and Edward thts goin to take more than just words and sit down becuz she isn't goin to be forgiving Bella anytime soon regardless of the fact tht Bella gave birth to niece she will forever hate her not only did Bella put her family in harms way in different occasions but she also kissed her mate which clearly shows tht this bitch doesn't show respect in certain relationships I mean she knew about Jacob and Savannah and yet she still have feelings for Jacob bitch u have a man y try to weasel ur way into another one so yeah understand Savannah's hatred for her but her and Edward needs to talk it out eventually like he can't really be tht slow to understand the hatred tht Savannah has for Bella I mean she is ur sister who took care of u and was there for everything even turning herself into a vampire to be with u so the fact tht u r turning a blind eye on ur one family member for some mousy bitch who is confused about her feelings for two guys and always defending her, he has some fucked up priorities I would be pissed off too, anyhoo great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Well 2 quick updates that makes me happy :) I don't know what I want to happen because the. It ruins the surprise of the story, but I do know that I want savannah and Jacob to somehow work out their issues. They need to hash it out and quite honestly if Savannah always hates Bella I wouldn't care that much. I like how you changed it up with the ENTIRE Volturi coming. Can't wait for more!

@ AnaShadows
Didn't mean to. Comment wouldn't show up even after leaving page and coming back lol. Don't know why it did or why it posted parts of it then all of it.

I'm in love with this story!! Please upload soon

@ Cyanide-Charlie
Please stop with the repeat posting(:

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Not a big fan of Twilight fanfiction anymore but this was pretty good.
I like the detail and the style of your writing. Keep it up!
Will definatly read more if you post more!

Brought here thanks to comment swap :)
Not a big fan of Twilight fanfiction anymore but this was pretty good.
I like the detail and the style of your writing. Keep it up!
Will definatly read more if you post more!-cc

Brought here thanks to comment swap :)
Not a big fan of Twilight fanfiction anymore but this was pretty good.
I like the detail and the style of your writing. Keep it up!
Will definatly read more if you post more!-cc

Brought here thanks to comment swap :)
Not a big fan of Twilight fanfiction anymore but this was pretty good. Will definatly read more if you post more!-cc

Brought here thanks to comment swap :)
Not a big fan of Twilight fanfiction anymore but this was pretty good. Will definatly read more if you post more!-cc

Yay! Excited for the story to continue!! :)