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  • Greenwolf7

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    They should be at the to of the story but the next one is taking you back and then the one after that is no escape xxxx
    October 3rd, 2014 at 08:51pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    @ Ca20000 Your welcome :) What are the sequels names?
    October 3rd, 2014 at 08:29pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    @ Mrs. Zacky Vengeance
    Hey thanks for commenting but I would like you to know that this story is finished and would love if u read the sequels to orbit thanks for the comment and glad you liked itxxxx
    October 3rd, 2014 at 07:55pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Update!!!!!!!
    October 3rd, 2014 at 06:24pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    5- Shadows is being such a creep.
    10- How stupid would the leader of a gang have to be to meet with the leaders, LEADERS, plural, of the enemy gang with no backup, no precautions, and no bulletproof vest? How did he survive that long, I would like to know…
    12- This is kind of interesting, but Shadows is basically sick and I don’t like how many opportunities Annie had to knee him in the balls and didn’t.
    August 20th, 2014 at 08:50pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    5- Shadows is being such a creep.
    10- How stupid would the leader of a gang have to be to meet with the leaders, LEADERS, plural, of the enemy gang with no backup, no precautions, and no bulletproof vest? How did he survive that long, I would like to know…
    12- This is kind of interesting, but Shadows is basically sick and I don’t like how many opportunities Annie had to knee him in the balls and didn’t.
    August 20th, 2014 at 08:49pm
  • wildone101

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    i luv how syn kinda sweet in first chapter!!
    December 7th, 2013 at 06:54pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    That story was so amazing! I am so happy she finally got home! I wonder if all of the guys survived! I can't wait to read to the sequel! Thank you!
    November 14th, 2013 at 02:05am
  • Jayme112234

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    Can't wait to see what happens in the sequel xxx
    November 13th, 2013 at 08:59pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    The next chapter should be them moving to the new mansion and Annie's father working on an escape plan for her! Please update soon!
    November 12th, 2013 at 10:33pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    The next chapter should be them moving to the new mansion and Annie's father working on a rescue plan! Please update soon!
    November 12th, 2013 at 10:32pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    My favorite chapter has to be this new one! It is creepy and romantic at the same time! I think Claire should let Annie's father know what happened and about Annie being married to Shadows, and the guys should plan an escape to another country before Annie is rescued and Shadows still won't let her go! That is all I have so far, I hope you like it! Please update soon! Please write a sequel!
    November 12th, 2013 at 01:03am
  • jess-vampirefreak

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    i think that Claire should escape on her own and let Annie's father know because then we can see shadows get more and more desperate and maybe turn on syn because it was Claire that escaped this would probably cause the whole group dynamic to fall apart causing more Anarchy and allowing Annie to be rescued or escape
    November 11th, 2013 at 10:42pm
  • mattpunzel

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    You included Oli Sykes..I'm liking this story. :3
    November 10th, 2013 at 10:09pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I really like the first one, because it would be a really great start to a sequel where Shadows tries to find her and take her again! Please update soon!
    November 10th, 2013 at 08:46pm
  • Jayme112234

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    I'm torn between option 1 and 2... great chapter xxx
    November 10th, 2013 at 07:21pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    This new chapter has to be my favorite! I would love to see her try to escape now with the ankle alarm! Please update soon!
    November 10th, 2013 at 01:46am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I think what Shadows pulled out of the drawer are things that will make Annie behave and not fight him! This is getting way too good! Please update soon!
    November 9th, 2013 at 11:09pm
  • Jayme112234

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    Loving the story and I can't wait to see what happens next xxx
    November 9th, 2013 at 05:55pm
  • Nyesha's pride

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    No no no!!!! No sequel. Please let them get away on this one. I hate shadows and I hate the rear if them. Please just make them escape already cause shadows us pissing me off. Please update soon. Sad
    November 9th, 2013 at 03:48am