@ Mrs. Zacky Vengeance Hey thanks for commenting but I would like you to know that this story is finished and would love if u read the sequels to orbit thanks for the comment and glad you liked itxxxx
5- Shadows is being such a creep. 10- How stupid would the leader of a gang have to be to meet with the leaders, LEADERS, plural, of the enemy gang with no backup, no precautions, and no bulletproof vest? How did he survive that long, I would like to know… 12- This is kind of interesting, but Shadows is basically sick and I don’t like how many opportunities Annie had to knee him in the balls and didn’t.
5- Shadows is being such a creep. 10- How stupid would the leader of a gang have to be to meet with the leaders, LEADERS, plural, of the enemy gang with no backup, no precautions, and no bulletproof vest? How did he survive that long, I would like to know… 12- This is kind of interesting, but Shadows is basically sick and I don’t like how many opportunities Annie had to knee him in the balls and didn’t.
My favorite chapter has to be this new one! It is creepy and romantic at the same time! I think Claire should let Annie's father know what happened and about Annie being married to Shadows, and the guys should plan an escape to another country before Annie is rescued and Shadows still won't let her go! That is all I have so far, I hope you like it! Please update soon! Please write a sequel!
i think that Claire should escape on her own and let Annie's father know because then we can see shadows get more and more desperate and maybe turn on syn because it was Claire that escaped this would probably cause the whole group dynamic to fall apart causing more Anarchy and allowing Annie to be rescued or escape
I really like the first one, because it would be a really great start to a sequel where Shadows tries to find her and take her again! Please update soon!
I think what Shadows pulled out of the drawer are things that will make Annie behave and not fight him! This is getting way too good! Please update soon!
No no no!!!! No sequel. Please let them get away on this one. I hate shadows and I hate the rear if them. Please just make them escape already cause shadows us pissing me off. Please update soon.