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  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Yes! I would really love to see a sequel! Update soon!
    November 8th, 2013 at 07:16pm
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    I love it! I think you should let Shadows take Annie back to their room and him explaining to her the operation she just had! Please update soon!
    November 8th, 2013 at 04:47am
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    Please update soon!
    November 6th, 2013 at 04:43am
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    Ok that was a really cool chapter! It would make sense for Shadows to do that to her! I think he is going to take her back to her room so she can recover, but she is really going to hate him for doing this to her, and she will be very depressed and sad and won't eat anything, but Shadows will force her to eat and have sex! Please update soon!
    November 5th, 2013 at 01:43am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Yes! Please do a sequel where he takes Annie back! In the next chapter, Shadows could visit Annie in her room and try to get her pregnant and in the sequel after she escapes, she finds out she is pregnant with Shadows baby, and she decides to keep the baby and protect him or her from Shadows, but then he finds out about the baby, and he takes her back so he can take care of her before the baby comes, but this time, in the sequel, he is really crazy! Update soon!
    November 3rd, 2013 at 08:09pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Hey I just thought of something, if you make a sequel to where Shadows takes Annie back, you should make it where Annie and Claire are against A7X and they kill A7X once and for all.. I'm trying to give you ideas lol have you checked out my Hail To The King story? If not, you should it's pretty good it's got a pic of Zacky and it says Hail to the King. its a Zacky V. fanfic haha :)
    November 3rd, 2013 at 07:49pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Ahh. :) I think that is a good idea I love it :)!! Keep updating please lol I love this story Shadows has gone freaking insane!!! :) Good job on this story
    November 3rd, 2013 at 06:59pm
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    @ Mrs. Zacky Vengeance
    i like it
    they will escaoe but i was thinking of doing a sequal to it where he takes annie back
    but their escape is coming xxxxxx
    November 3rd, 2013 at 06:32pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Okay i have an idea, you should go a few more chapters with stuff like this and then Annie, Claire, and Sky annies puppy finally escape and then Annie's dad finds a way to kill A7X once and for all :)
    November 3rd, 2013 at 06:19pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I think they should keep her like they did Annie, then they could escape together with Annie's puppy! Update soon!
    November 3rd, 2013 at 04:56pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Keep her and then they can escape together :) Update Soon !!:) Please
    November 3rd, 2013 at 04:41pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Now Shadows has really gone nuts! Please update soon!
    November 2nd, 2013 at 10:27pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Yay!!:) I love this more :)!! Sorry am I being annoying? I just really like this it always has me on the edge of my seat lol
    November 2nd, 2013 at 09:12pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Yay!!:) I love this more :)!! Sorry am I being annoying? I just really like this it always has me on the edge of my seat lol
    November 2nd, 2013 at 09:11pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Yay!!:) I love this more :)!! Sorry am I being annoying? I just really like this it always has me on the edge of my seat lol
    November 2nd, 2013 at 09:11pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Keep going :)!!
    November 2nd, 2013 at 06:40pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Keep going :)!!
    November 2nd, 2013 at 06:40pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I think her next present is that Shadows rented out a club so they could have a birthday party for her! That is so cool they got her a puppy! Update soon!
    November 2nd, 2013 at 04:12pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    will Annie escape ever?!
    November 2nd, 2013 at 03:09pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    will Annie escape ever?!
    November 2nd, 2013 at 03:09pm
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