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  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    AWW:) I love it !! Keep updating :)!!
    November 2nd, 2013 at 03:09pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Keep Updating :)!
    November 2nd, 2013 at 03:28am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Thank you so much for using my idea for the next chapter! I can't wait to see her birthday party! Update soon!
    November 1st, 2013 at 11:34pm
  • Mrs. Zacky Vengeance

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    Okay I like this story so if you can please update very soon. Hey Everyone if you haven't yet check out my story Hail to the King a Zacky Vengeance fanfic! I'd love for you to check it out and let me know what you think!!:)
    November 1st, 2013 at 09:32pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I think the next chapter should be her birthday! He could plan a party for her but still be really creepy about it! Please update soon!
    November 1st, 2013 at 06:33pm
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    @ NikkiFoxy8
    Omg that's such a great idea thank you thank you xxxxxx
    November 1st, 2013 at 03:22pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I think the paper he made her sign was something saying that she agreed to have the doctor give her the medicine or it could say that she agreed to belong to him forever, or it could say that she agreed to have children with him! Update soon!
    November 1st, 2013 at 03:13pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    Sorry that meant to say don't worry she will escape but just no yet
    I have some very crazy ideas xxxxx
    November 1st, 2013 at 07:44am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Hey, sorry about the last comment, I didn't understand what you meant! Please update soon!
    November 1st, 2013 at 04:21am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    @ Ca20000
    That's cool! Thank you! What do you mean by don't? Please update soon!
    November 1st, 2013 at 01:33am
  • Greenwolf7

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    @ NikkiFoxy8
    Uh don't she will escape but not yet and was maybe think of doing a sequel or was just going to do a new story xxxx
    November 1st, 2013 at 01:23am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I think Annie should act like a good girl so she can trick him and escape and be free of him for good! I really want her to make it out alive! Please let her survive! Update soon!
    November 1st, 2013 at 01:21am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Please don't let Annie die! At some time, let her earn Shadows trust so she can fight him and escape for good! She could let him have sex with her and she can act like the loving wife so she can trick him and escape and be free! Update soon!
    October 31st, 2013 at 10:54pm
  • Demona_Dragonne

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    please update Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    October 31st, 2013 at 10:16pm
  • Narutoechelongirl

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    Maybe Annie gets pregnant and then she dies, leaving Matt to rot in hell alone and then he commits suicide , and then Syn takes the child and then after so many years Annie's daughter falls in love with someone from the BVB mob and it's illegal and blah blah , btw if you wanna do a sequel I volunteer as a cowriter , please guys read my story too and tell me what you think xx
    October 31st, 2013 at 08:08pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    That's okay if she doesn't fall in love with him! He is really crazy now that he has her locked in the basement! One idea that I have is that when he visits her in the basement, he has sex with her every day, and he gives her more drugs to keep her from leaving and brings her back up stairs! Update soon!
    October 31st, 2013 at 06:41pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    That is so crazy that another girl was tricked like Annie! I think it would be really cool if Annie started to have some feelings for Matt, and maybe try to love him! That would be a really cool twist! Update soon!
    October 31st, 2013 at 02:51pm
  • Narutoechelongirl

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    Ok so I'm literally getting pissed with Matt by the chapter lol , come Annie show some love , I want a twist yay !
    October 31st, 2013 at 02:34pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Matt is crazy! That had to be my favorite part where he told Annie he killed her mother! That is so crazy! He should give her another shot of the drugs and while she is weak, he can tell her how he fell in love with her and how he started following her and talk about their future together! Please update soon!
    October 31st, 2013 at 12:02am
  • Narutoechelongirl

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    OMG why is Matt a psycho , I'm so with Annie , how can she love shadows after all he did to her , unless he did all this for a reason , other than being a selfish , crazy , psycho-obsessive bastard !
    October 30th, 2013 at 10:52pm