Murder in Autumn - Comments

@ Atlas Finch
Thank you so much! Your comments totally made my day. I was planning on doing flashbacks to Jenn's life before her murder so you will get to see what she was like during life. I'm planning on updating soon :)

I'm really impressed by the quality of this story, even just at first glance. The descriptions are beautiful, especially the scene involving the funeral. The characters are realistic, and their dialogue seems genuine and unforced. My only small suggestion (because I coudn't find anything to be critical of), is that I wish the story had started slight earlier in the timeline and done something like John Green's "Looking for Alaska", and shown a bit of Jenn's life before her murder. I just think this would emotionally invest the reader, and help us really connect with the turmoil the characters must be feeling. Besides that, I love it and I can't wait for you to update. You're an excellent writer. Best wishes!