The Bond of Brothers - Comments

Just checking in! How are you?

Thanks guys for the kind words. It has been a really hard few weeks, but we're doing okay. Writing is usually my outlet for tough times, so I'm going to delve into that as much as possible.

So sorry to hear about your dad. I hope your and your family is doing okay.

So sorry about your dad! *hugs* Hopefully writing helps you in some way! You're sure an amazing writer! I missed this story a lot, glad you decided to keep going.

I wonder who that girl was? Also, Kevin ... A tad bit sketchy. Something's up for sure.

@ lady_enigma
Thank you!

I was wondering where you'd gotten to. I'm so sorry for your loss.

I have missed your stories a lot, I feel so badly for Patrick, at least he tried

@ jchavers2006
I miss this story! Can't wait until you update! :D

@ AutumnBlooms
Thank you :) You have no idea how your kind words make me feel. Keeps me inspired to write more. I have read a lot of fiction-- fan fiction included and it has inspired me. I've loved writing since I was a child. My brother got the art ability....I got the ability of words. LOL. But again thank you. I'll update as soon as possible I promise.

And I like how you all are thinking. I love stories where you can't be sure what a characters intentions are and make you wonder. And especially when they fool you and turn out to be different.

Also suspicious of Kevin. But at the same time, why was he trying to get Patrick to remember as if he also didn't know what happened? Unless he wants to know what Patrick knows so he can manipulate him or his thoughts before he tells anyone else. So pretty much we need another update! ;)

And your writing is just....I don't even know! I don't know how you write so well, but I'm so so glad you do! I absolutely love this story, I've not read anything quite like this. Not even talking about the storyline, but even if I did read something similar, it would never be as good. This is like...hardly the typical fanfiction and I love that about it, too. Ugh, you're an amazing writer!

Thank you sooooo much! Your kind words mean a lot to me. This story is one of the most challenging things I have ever written. I'll update this week, just checking to make sure the chapter is ready.

I need this story in my life haha. Please keep updating!

should I be suspicious of Kevin? Because I am

Aw, I'm glad he's coming around! Slowly but surely.

@ AutumnBloom Thanks so much! This story means so much to me so I better finish it! LOL. I promise another update soon.

I have this irrational fear that this story won't be updated again and we'll never know what happens...

That's how much you've drawn me into this. You're writing style is admirable and I love the flow of this story. I haven't read anything written quite like this on here, and I just love it!

I'm glad Patrick's agreeing to go to counseling. I'm anxious to see what it brings forth for him and his memory.

Patrick and Kevin's bond is great.

Honestly this is such an emotional story. And it's gotta be hard for Patrick, it's gotta be really hard. Its got to be hard for Elisa too, i know she means well, they all do, but its not going to help if they keep pushing things on him. The counselling should be good for Patrick though. I really hope it helps. So far he hasn't coped at home so far at all.

Glad you updated! I loved it, as usual. Poor Patrick. Elisa should've known better than to do that to him. He didn't even know who *she* was, why would he enjoy seeing a whole group of strangers the moment he gets 'home'?

Can't wait for the next chapter...

With the exception of Kevin that was irresponsibility at its highest and common sense at its lowest. Poor Patrick, it's not that he wants to be an ass hole to everyone, and he isn't being. They should understand that and stop trying to puah things on him

Ah, Patrick. Being an asshole. I'm hoping he gets over being pissed and finds out how to be himself again. Or make himself better than he was before.

Ah, Patrick. Being an asshole. I'm hoping he gets over being pissed and finds out how to be himself again. Or make himself better than he was before.