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  • jchavers2006

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    @ lady_enigma
    Thank you so much! It's been a challenge to write, especially since I want it to be as accurate as possible and I'm not remotely an expert at any of this.
    November 14th, 2013 at 09:58pm
  • lady_enygma

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    Oh my word so much emotion. And it is so spot on as well with brain injuries. Its so hard to read yet so good
    November 14th, 2013 at 09:12pm
  • AutumnBlooms

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    Gosh, so good! Can't wait for more, as usual...
    November 2nd, 2013 at 03:37am
  • lady_enygma

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    well, he's awake, but like the doctor said, long way to recovery
    November 2nd, 2013 at 01:24am
  • lady_enygma

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    Girl he' dbetter not doe
    October 27th, 2013 at 11:17pm
  • jchavers2006

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    Thanks guys! This is my favorite type of story and genre to read and write.
    Oh also...sorry I love cliff hangers. An update will come soon! :)
    October 27th, 2013 at 05:58pm
  • AutumnBlooms

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    Hey! Why'd you stop it there?! ;)

    On the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!
    October 27th, 2013 at 05:45am
  • less16candles

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    this is INTENSE
    October 27th, 2013 at 03:17am
  • Mermaid;

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    I absolutely love how detailed you can get, it helps the mind imagine what is happening! The way you are heading with the story is pretty good, I personally love angsty stories and this is perfect for my taste. It is quite suspenseful as well which is a definite bonus.
    October 25th, 2013 at 07:19pm
  • AutumnBlooms

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    Woah, love the story so far! And the long chapter, too, by the way. Love when writers get wordy! :D

    I can't wait for an update!
    October 25th, 2013 at 05:26am
  • jchavers2006

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    Mr. Green Thanks for the wonderful comments! Means sooo much!
    October 24th, 2013 at 12:19am
  • Marnz

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    Amazing the only words I have
    October 23rd, 2013 at 11:47pm
  • lady_enygma

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    Oh my god, this is so emotional. It's so well written, and just, I have no words, I can't form them. It's just, wow. I worship everyrhing about this story
    October 23rd, 2013 at 11:10pm
  • jchavers2006

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    Thank you so much! :)
    October 23rd, 2013 at 09:43pm
  • Marnz

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    This story is amazing so far :)
    October 23rd, 2013 at 04:04am