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Zacky doesn't have to wait to tell Matt anymore. I didn't think about why she doesn't remember the wolf side..I'm still kinda worried how she and especially Brian are going to react ..

Update soon!!!

Oh, that was a good reaction from Matt's part. I was thinking he would go crazy and call everybody to let them know about the fact that Ava was alive, but he was really cool about that. And now Zacky doesn't have to worry about telling the pack, because Matt already knows. I wonder how Brian will react to the fact that Matt didn't tell him anything about it, though.

I also wonder if Mabel had anything to do with Ava not remembering her wolf side.

I just really want to read the next update, now, because I'm dying to know how Zacky will try to make things right with her this time :3

Loved the chapter, as always!

I'm glad Zack doesn't have to cope with knowing Ava is alive. At least he can talk to Matt if he needs to. Matt shouldn't have expected that Zack was lying about his mate being alive.
Awesome as always can't wait for next update :)

At this point i hope she never gets her memory back lol. i really do like the fact that he has to rebuild everything with her and show that he can actually be a good guy instead of the asshole but ill remember what you said, keep my expectations low.

And i just keep thinkng about how vrian could probably mess thiss all up for him. i know brian's gonna probably be the only one unhappy about this and he'd probably tty to refresh her memory with all the bad stuff her and zacky went through together. Kinda on zacky's side through this since he's trying to make things right.

no worries on the commenting back stuff love, just makes me feel cool that you see my comment but the replies always make me smile too ofcourse ~

can't wait to read what's next c:

yay! i love this story soo much :)

Ah! Matt knows! And this chapter definitely has me wondering about her wolf side. Now i'm curious as to how she has no idea and also the fact that it doesn't seem to show at all. I'm also glad that it's possibly the mating bond that draws her to him. I'm curious as to what the doctor will say too, and I hope Matt keeps to his word, or if he doesn't that all hell doesn't break loose. I can't wait to see what happens next, once again, you have me sitting on the edge of my seat in anticipation. That was a pretty speedy update by the way ;) Loved it!

Earlier today me and a friend were talking about anime and he told me of how in Gundam, one of the characters almost lost his life while defeating the villain. Instead of dying though, he loses his memories and later slips into a coma. My friend looked upset and said he felt like he had no closure.

He told me how over the series he felt he had gotten to know the character and watch him mature as if he were his best friend. I sort of feel that way about Ava. Like I had gotten to know her personally- and tl;dr this is very well written and I can't wait for more love.

awh i hope matt sticks to his word and gives those two the time they need, i seriously can NOT wait to see what happens next, see how things unfold!! i just hope to god when and if she gets her memories back zacky and her can still work it out!

Wow, this is magnificent. all the endless possibilities of what could happen next... i can almost not contain my excitement. thank you. nothing you could do with this story could disappoint me. i have no expectations i just want to enjoy the story as you write it. thank you for sharing this.

I gotta be honest with you Matt pissed me off in this chapter. First off, Zack has been a wreck since Ava “died” so I think it is kind of messed up for him to insinuate that Zee would do that. I mean seriously he has only been gone two days, and I don’t think that he would just jump into bed with some random chick and she is going to make him feel all better just like that. Plus if he was going to do that would he have just done that at home? Why would he wait till he left?

Second: He knew what Zacky was going through that day, how he was convinced that Ava behind all those things that happened to him. There wasn't enough time to convince Zacky that what he had believed to be the truth for years wasn't true, AND it's not like he knew there was an explosion. So it is a little unfair of Matt to say that Ava has a reason to be afraid of Zack. NOW Zacky did leave her behind and that was fucked up, but that's not a reason to be afraid of him. I mean if the roles were reversed wouldn’t Ava have left Zack behind? I’m 100% she would have.

I will say this though, I’m so glad that Matt isn’t going to say anything to the rest of the pack. I’ve already expressed to you my fears of what will happen if Brian finds out. Zack was right he and Ava have a clean slate and this is his second chance to do things right, and I’m glad that Matt is going to let him.

So anyway thank you for updating, I’ve been checking in all day waiting to see if you had updated. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. :)

Matt knows so tht something he also has to keep to himself anyhoo great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

OMG!!! Matt knows… crap Zacky didn't tell Matt that he told Ava they're married… well I guess he can do that later. But at least I know it's not all in Zacky's head this time. I hope everything works out and I worried what the hell is up with the damn witches… something is going on because Ava doesn't remember anything for a reason. I bet they put some sort of spell on her. Well it's just a theory I have but I can't wait for the next update...

Yay… they are going to fall in love I just know it… but in the back of my mind I know there are still some loose ends that are going to come up and I don't think I'm ready for that. I can't wait until the next update because I want to read more about them connecting. Awesome update and please update soon!!!!

Ee-hee-hee, I loved this :3 I liked the talking and the memories. I love how Zacky lost the bed argument :P But even though I am loving all of this, I am very, very cautious of you missy! This almost seems too good to be true right now. I will die if this is all in Zee's head and that she's not really alive. I will die! Knowing you, you will twist it that way! Which i pray that you don't cause that will tear my heart out of my chest! Okay, you can update soon now please :) sorry I took so long to respond. I don't have much privacy anymore. My laptop screen is broken, so I have it plugged up to the TV. So I don't read this around my boyfriend or roommates xP I've been dying to read this & am glad I finally got to. It's definitely worth it. Please update soon!

Love it, they r so cute even tho everything is just fucking crazy anyhoo great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Wow. She really is alive. And doesn't remember anything. I like this a lot. I like how innocent she is right now x) This could be a fresh start for them. That is, if she forgives him if she ever regains her memories. But for right now, I like this. Ugh, that witch is a bitch! haha, always wanted to say that ^_^

Is....is this really true? Did she really make it out alive? I am so confused, so I am going to keep reading :)

I LOVED this chapter. It was painfully cute! I love how Ava is so understanding and feeling beyond comfortable with Zacky. Even though a bit of it isn't the complete truth. I'm hoping that if and when she actually finds out she's his mate instead of actual husband she doesn't get upset and go back to being the cold Ava she was before her near-death experience.

I also love how gentleman like and chivalrous Zack is being with her, like he's taking his second chance to the max. That even though he keeps second guessing everything that he is really trying to keep everything positive. I'm dying to know how the others will react, especially Matt and Brian. Brian's going to lose his shit, hopefully in the best way. I anticipate the next installment to this story. I'm so in love with this.

And thank you so fucking much for putting my story in the author's note. That means so much! You're such a kind writer and person to do that for me. I hope your readers enjoy it as much as you do. I'm actually in the process of getting into continuing the update I've already started. So once again, thank you so much and I anticipate the next update :)

Awesome as always I cant wait for more :)

I feel kinda weird for liking how cute this chapter since they've never been this cute with eachother before lol. its so weird.

Atleast they got this cute moment in before they went back to the guys. i can't even imagine how thats gonna go and the fact that she has no idea what they are right now. so much info to get through. i cant wait for the next part ~