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They are so cute like this BUT I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop!!!
She's gonna kill him if and when she gets her memory back.

What are the guys gonna say? Especially Brian...
So happy you upated! Can't wait!!

Amazing! These chapters keep getting better and better!
I admit I miss Ava's old attitude, but the way they're interacting now is just so cute. I have no words! And the way she reacted to what he told her about her old self... gah, I love them so much, god damn it! :3
But I think Zacky needs to tell the rest of the pack that she's alive as soon as possible. They'll skin him alive if he keeps hiding that for much more time! And I can't wait for her to get her memory back, either. I honestly want to know how she'll react to the progress she's making with Zacky, too. Will she be pissed? She most probably will...
Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

I was just thinking about messaging you saying I needed another chapter before I went crazy on you! loved it! so cute that they are getting to know eachother again! I honestly hope they stay happy they both deserve it! but alas i'm sure you have something up your sleeve!

Fantastic. absolutely wonderful chapter. everytime i get an email telling me there is an update i get so excited and i have NEVER been dissappointed. thank you so so very much.

God I love this story! I just thought I'd tell you that (I'm sure I've already told you this several times but I figured I just remind you). XD And may I just say that I was glad to see SOME (not much but a little) of the old Ava there. I don't mind her being snarky and what not, I just didn't like the "calculating bitch" part of her that we saw in the WWLU. But as Zacky said she is his bitch. XD

I love that they are doing things the right way this time and to be honest that they don't have to deal with the not knowing the whole truth about the other person. Well mainly Zacky here since Ava doesn't really know him, but I'd say it's working out into both their favors. If she had remembered him things would be very different right now, like she might be trying to kill him like Zacky has dreamt about.

The one thing that has me worried and wondering about what Zacky is telling her is what happens when Ava starts remembering? Will the lies or half-truths end up ruining any progress they have made? Or what if it turns out that the guys (mainly Brian) find out she is still alive and tells her the truth. If she remembers the past at least it wouldn't be totally colored by anger like it would be if Brian were to try and tell her the truth. Brian could (would?) paint their history in a much worse light.

Anyways, thank you for the Christmas gift (who care if it was a day late). I honestly wouldn't expect you to update on Christmas anyways. I was busy with family and I'm sure you were too so... Hope all is going well and you are settling back in at home and that you had a wonderful Christmas. Hopefully I'll talk to you before the New Year but if now then, "Happy New Year!"

U shit! I was crying so hard because I had become attached to Ava. And then when you killed her off, I accepted it BUT NOW you bring her back and I don't have any control over what I'm feeling anymore goodnight I'm done.

ZACKY, YOU ARE ONE CLEVER LITTLE SHIT!

Of all the things that Zacky has said and done to get his way, I love it, this is my absolute favorite! Married. He told Ava that they were married! I could not contain my laughter! I just hope that he puts a damn ring on her finger the minute he gets her back home if he wants to keep up with the charade while she's still lost her memory!

And, holy shit, don't even get me started on that witch! As much as I adore her over protectiveness for Ava but, at the same time, I'm still super iffy. Wouldnt Drake know that she's still alive regardless? Would he know how hard it is to kill a pure blood? What if that witch is working with him?!

Ahh... That'd be a smart move on his sassy part.

Haha, happy to have made you laugh :D thank you for this wonderful update. it just keeps getting better!!

I hate that I couldn't comment on every chapter like I have been. :/ Being in bed sick is terrible. Soooo.....

OMZV!!!!!!!!!!! I knew she wasn't dead!! Aaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
I knew Mabel was bad news when she come over to Ava.
Please please please update soon!!!

Finally found the time to read this and I'm so excited that you're finally writing this hehe. The first chapter started out intense and just by how it started you could just tell how Zacky's spiralled down to the bottom, like he's just given up. That's just what I believe. He's lost hope in my eyes and has nothing to literally fight for. I miss her already ugh.

Second chapter started out really good that too, Matt finally coming to his senses as well after thinking that Zack needed to leave for a while and calm down but he had managed to forget some of the other problems in the middle of all this. Then the "mutual" friend guy pops up and that just kicked in my nerves, like who was he and who is the mutual friend? In my mind I'm thinking Ava cause god knows I'm still rooting for her to be alive, even if there's 0.1% chance that she is. Of course its from Ava omg. (Sorry if I just jump to things, I read and comment at the same time)
Ohhh, it finally hit Matt even more now as he heard what she had written. Moarrr guilt coming up and sadness for poor Matty.

I love how the fourth chapter just played out so perfect, legit the most perfect chapter and sort of how I imaginde it to be when they met! I knew if she would be alive she wouldn't know who he was!! It was just a gut feeling. Also I love how it was a pure insight on Zack's feelings and thoughts, it was a really emotional and intense part, which I loved.

Oh, i liked how resistant Mabel is, she is obviously and definitely hiding something, she must be trying to keep Ava away from this entire supernatural word, hiding her from something, someone.

Oh now I read who Mabel was, she might be a witch but she's legit acting like one. She's got something up her sleeve, ugh. I love how Ava despite what just has that gut feeling and tells the Witch off however I once again have a hunch that this wont be the last of it..

Can't wait till the next update, I really love this. No I can't lower my expectations because any chapter you write is even more amazing than the previous one.

"seriously. lower your expectation"
i really don't know why that makes me laugh a bit. my expectation are lowerd, even though i don't want them to be. don't worry. well i mean im trying to lower them as much as i can but it's really hard.

Im just seriiusly happy she's aliveand im seriously happy she agreed to go with him, even though we all know it probably won't go well with th pack which means they'll probably just give zacky more shit than he needs. I can't wait to see how she'll take it finding out she's a wolf. i just can't for the next chapter love ~

This was amazing! Ava being nice and Zacky being all protective over her, gah, this is crazy but I love it so much!! :3
And that damn witch.. Something's telling me that she'll be great trouble. But I was so happy when she had to accept Ava going with Zacky hehe.
And oh my god, Zacky telling her that they're married is officially my favorite part of this story so far. I laughed so hard when I read that! He was super cute!!
Ugh I love this story so much! Please update soon :D

I knew she wasn't dead I frikkin knew it. I just got caught up and I love it… so Mabel's a witch and Ava's alive and being called Violet? I hope Zacky can have a fresh start with her before he takes her back to the pack. I'm so glad she not dead but I have a feeling that its only going to get worst after everything really comes out like that fact that's she's a wolf and what happened leading up to the explosion. Can't wait until the next update...

I am so so so so so glad that she is alive you have no idea, her memory loss is kind of a bummer but it could have been worse, and mabel some witch she really is if she can't use her magic to prove zacky isn't lieing i know she's looking out for ava(or is she, the whole thing seems fishy) but damn she doesn't have to be so cruel. i seriously CAN NOT wait to see how the pack takes the news, and her brother oh my gosh is he going to be surprised.

*multple mind explosions* what the actual fuck is goin on like seriously my mind can't take it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

She doesn't even know she's a wolf?! oh god... but it is nice to see Zacky being nice to her.

Amazing XD I understand that Mabel was just looking out for Ava but she should have let Zack explain.
Can wait for more :)

I cant lower my expectations with your writing! I hate mabel so much. Stop interfering with your shady business witch!

So glad to see you updated on Zacky's birthday (where you are at anyways)! :) I've been checking all day hoping that you would! XD

What the hell? Does she even know if she is a werewolf? Can you even forget that you are a werewolf? Things just got a heck of a lot weirder and crazier that is for sure.

I think Mabel is a witch.

NEVER thought I'd say this but I miss the old Ava! Hell has offically frozen over! This whole being nice thing is weird.

I will say this though: Zacky is fucking adorable right now! Being all protective and gentlemanly with Ava. XD I love it!!!

I was right! XD

Oh god I'm dying here!!!! LOL! I bet Zacky never thought he would ever be saying they were married.

This chapter is probably going to be my favorite chapter of the whole story! I loved Zacky having Mabel look him up on the internet.

I have to tell you that I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!! New favorite for sure! XD

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