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TEAM AVA 4 LAIF

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

OMG OMG OMG SHE'S ALIVE!!!!!

Please don't let it be a dream!!!!!!

Yessssss. Fuck this bitch, I mean, witch. She needs to get the hell out. I'm glad Zack was able to convince her to go back with him. Though it really took no convincing at all. I'm just beyond ecstatic that he has her back! I can't wait to find out what happens when the rest of the pack finds out, especially Matt and Brian. Oh my damn they're gunna lose their shit! Gawd I'm so stoked!

Uh. I'm so confused! I've been working constantly so I was surprised to see two updates. Is Ava really alive and has amnesia or what?
Knowing you there is a huge twist! Sooo until the next update I'll just let myself believe she's alive.

Can't wait!!

OHkay, what the hell just happened, is this really Ava here or is he just having a really really good hallucination?? and my expectations are way up now woman if you don't update every day now your gonna get it :P LOL just kidding, love that you update a lot but I won't hold it against you if don't.

Woah woah woah and woah. just woah. i know i shouldnt just expect what i want to happen but i just can't stop hoping. i'll keep it to myself so hopefully it happens. ( lock lips shut and throws away the key)

But seriously im not getting my hopes up lol after everything that happened, i just want something good to actually happen to zacky. am i crazy for that? I cqnt wqit for the next chapter~

what. what. omg. what. really!! omg. what is this? AAAH! update soon!! :O pleaaaase. why can't she remember him? how is she alive? oh my gosh. uuuupdate PLEAAAASE

OH MY FUCKING GOD! What the SHIT is going on?! I'm like, bouncing with joy and at the same time confused as shit as to what's going on. I so thought he was talking to a woman that resembled her and the whole thought of it being her tricked his senses to believe it was her scent. But now that I know it is her, I can't even. I'm beside myself right now. And I won't lie, I just did a victory dance. Holy shit. I'm so fuckin excited. If you could hear me saying everything in this comment, I'd sound like I popped right out of Brooklyn. I can't believe she's still alive, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, please, please, PLEASE update soon. I'm thankful for your frequent updates, by the way. But I anticipate the next update the most. Holy shit, good fucking job, miss.

OH MY GOD!!! What the heck?! I cannot wait for the next update!!! You are so good with cliffhangers!!!! I know you have some more tricks up your sleeves...Evil!!!

*mind exploded* can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

WAIT WHAT

Is this the real life? Is this just fantasy??

Lol I just had to qoute Queen xD

You know what? I'm not getting my hopes up lol. If she is alive (somehow) then I'll be happy when I find out...if not well, the blow won't be so bad. lol

Finally seeing the whole situation from Zacky's perspective made me sad and just frustrated me so much! lol Damn Z and his stubbornness and wrong conclusions and EVERYTHING!

I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Wish you could see the note I wrote while reading. On the upper half (while I read chapter 3) there are hearts and stuff doodled on the upper half the only things I see are big, bold WHAT?'s but step by step

You know I love Johnny and I love you for bringing him up and making him this adorable dork he is. But it makes me so sad, that no one knows how to act around Zacky - or themselves anymore. And I also got sad while they were talking about Ava. Poor Brian, he just needs a way to let this all out the right way, so he can mourne and move on. This doesn't help anyone as Matt stated.

I wish I could read the books, and I though it was cute that you added how they noticed that they were written by Ava not just by her writing but also by the comments.

And oh gosh the Zacky chapter made me so sad - and confused. I liked how we got a glimpse in his thoughts, and of course he didn't love her, but how he must hate himself when he now knows what could have happened if some events didn't happen.

The first thought when I read that Zacky saw her, I thought it was a trap by Drake so he could route him to a trap. But now I'm so confused I don't know what to think anymore. And I have no clue what will come, but I hope he doesn't get to attached to her.

And again poor Zacky, because he has no one right now. And how he must have felt when Matt was sending him away then. So I can't wait for more as always :)

Aw, okay as you've written such a long chapter (I just read chapter 2) I felt the need to write a review for this one as I knew my thoughts will be gone when I'll finished reading the other chapters.

Okay, so Ava sent them books. I'm not quiet sure what to think about this. It was cute and it showed how much she cared for them and especially that she sent them to Kat and oh gosh, Matt cried? I have to be honest I teared up a bit also.

So I can't wait to know what's written in the unlabled box, so I'm glad I can read further now :)

Annnddd plot twist!

Awwwwwwwwwwwww for some reason I didn't want to believe that she was really dead but Zack's reaction shows just how much he truly regretted everything.
I cant wait for more XD

Oh god, Oh god, Oh god... Is this chapter even real? Ava's alive!? I swear to god I broke in a fit of happy laughter when I read that! I'm so happy she's okay, even though I'm dying to know how she's healed and how she escaped and everything else.
I seriously can't explain how happy I am at the moment! And Zacky's reaction, gaah, amazing! :'D
But she doesn't remember anything. That's not good. Not good at all. And the guys need to know she's good and alive! And is Zacky going to explain everything to her? I have so many questions, gosh... You have to update real quickly, because I'm seriously dying to read more of this, now that I know Ava's alive! Haha, Ava's alive! This is so awesome!! :D
Thank you for this update!!

Okay, I awoke to find that you'd update with two chapters, and I have so much to say....

First off! It was nice of Johnny to check in on my favorite little Italian! I'm happy to hear that he hasn't killed himself just yet! :D But it's also quite sad, the fact that Brian got to be so pissy about it, because Zacky is still a member of their pack and is hurting just as much due to his stupidity. Poor little fella.

Ha! Johnny getting stuck with reading the binder full of Drake is my new favorite thing. It's also a shame that Brian is so unstable :/ I understand that Ava meant a lot to him but it's better if he just tries to keep it calm. I don't think anyone wants him to go all gung ho on an attack and end up just as dead as Ava and Jimmy.

SECONDLY! Zee is looking absolutely miserable! I can't help but wonder how his wolf half is torturing him? Like, what the hell goes on with that? What kind of inner turmoil is happening to make him seem like he's going insane? I know that it's due to the whole mate thing but I can't keep myself from asking why.

.......

Oh! Ava is alive.... HOW?!

She doesn't remember things going boom? Or that she ran in to save her mate? Does her wolf half even realize what the hell is going on?! What is going on? D:

I'm crying! I hate you! Poor Zacky! It just doesn't seem fair. I can't/won't hate him for thinking and feeling that way about Ava. It is understandable, but when I said that I want to hate Ava again, I didn't mean it the way you think. I just...I hate her because at the end of the day it is all because of her, and it's not her fault at all. It is very confusing what I'm feeling right now. I hope that makes sense to you. Does it? (If not I'll explain to you where my head is at XD)

I will say this; I do hope that by some miracle she is alive.

OMG!!! She's alive! HOLY CRAP! Here it is I'm hoping that she somehow survives and then I find out that she did! She somehow survived! Bet you never thought you would see the day I’m happy that Ava is alive!

WAIT?!?!?! WHAT?!?!?! WTF?!?!?!

Please tell me it is amnesia! That is a reasonable expectation correct? That would also explain why she didn’t go back to the guys afterwards too! I mean (I’m going to assume) a werewolf can possibly survive an explosion. Silver seems to be the only thing they have a hard time healing from so...surviving an explosion and healing aren't too far fetched. Holy crap I’m freaking out here! PLEASE TELL ME YOU AREN’T GOING TO DISAPPEAR NOW! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ermygawd! I don't even have words right now!
not dead... but no memories.

Sweet jesus christ thanks god and all the angels shes back!! I was literally crying when he touched the mating mark. It all came down there. I was so sad he was miserable and everyone else too. I cant believe you brought her back im so freaking happy. There's hope for the pack's future! Oh i'm so relieved you wouldnt even believe. THANK YOU. i know a writer shouldnt always please the readers but i think this was necessary for the carachters and you've acconplished to do it in a great way. Congrats