Slip - Comments

Thank god you came back :) I hope all has been well. We all missed you and this story. You're a brilliant writer and we had to know more to this. Welcome back ^_^ Can't wait for the next update. I'm on edge of wondering how this is all going to go down.

I think I said this last time but holy CRAP I have missed this story!

Life is what happens when you're busy making other plans! Don't apologize for your absence, it's cool. Just glad to see that you're still around!

As for the chapter.... Fantastic as always! I've missed this story and, truth be told, it's probably the only legit reason that I check this site every so often.

Please update this, I'm missing this story

I agree with Death_to_Roses. We miss you and we hope all is well!

Miss you. <3

Where'd you go? :(

Hope ure doing fine! Love the story

you should update its really good

you should update this its amazing

you should update this its amazing

I just caught up with the prequel and this story. Amazing. Their both good. I can't wait for you to update and see how everything goes. I am disappointed that she pushed Zack away, even after he helped her and was so nice to her.

Yea, I really only come back to this site now to read this story. I'm really happy you updated. Yes, I'm confused on a lot, but not really in a bad way. There are a lot of things hanging in the air here and I'm realizing that this story can go in multiple directions. Her secrets do get on my nerves. I don't feel anything really gets solved that way. Things are getting so inteeense! So so glad you came back :)

The only real reason that I find myself back on this site. I love this! I totally understand about the bit with the cheesecake, I have a favorite that I always get at the Cheesecake Factory too, I usually feel guilty when I cheat and go for a different kind!

This was a greally chapter and I'm just wondering why she's so full of secrets. I guess I can understand the need for them, seeing as she's gotta deal with a sassy little shit for a brother, but sometimes hers secrets just seem so unnecessary. Especially when keeping them from Brian! Haha but, great chapter! Can't wait to read what you have in store next!

Ava what ya hiding

Welcome back!

I am excited to find out what Ava is hiding and what will she do about her relationship with Zack.

Oh my god, I swear I thought about this story a couple of days ago and now, bam! An update! Welcome back!!
It's so nice to see the old Ava back (well, sort of the old Ava, she's not 100% her original self yet). I love all the mystery and that, but I can't help but feel impatient like Brian when she lies about what she knows.
Anyway, I really liked the update, and I can't wait to see how everything rolls out once she finally gets back home.
Patiently waiting for the next update!!

I'm so glad you're back! There's so much mystery hanging in the air and can't wait until we find out more! Hope your next update takes a little less time!! lol :)

Welcome back :)

I look forward to another update no matter how long it may take. I still love this story :)

...Holy cow, it has been forever!

I don't know if I've said it before but I love the relationship between Brian and Ava. He really just knows her, better than anyone else, and the fact that she thinks she can pull a fast one over on him just makes me shake my head. He knows she's lying. The only question is, about what?!

And they're little comments about cheating on their cheesecake made me laugh. Just another reason why I love them so damn much. And I loved this chapter! THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK!