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Looking forward to the next update!

Welcome back! And just so you know, I came out of my Mibba hiatus when I noticed you updated!! My thoughts are all over the place trying to figure this witch out!! That was a pretty tense scene.

I'm also trying to figure out Ava and how much she actually knows with the spell and all... Oh my god! So many things that still have to be uncovered! Can't wait for the next updates! :D

This is blowing my mind. I want to know what's going on. What's in store for Ava & Zacky? I don't want them to be on bad terms >.< Actually, it'd be really kick ass if they worked as a team finally instead of against each other. I dunno. I'm also confused on the conversation with the witch and what it all means. I can't wait to find out. Welcome back, we've missed you & this story! And I knew the witch casted that spell on her! But what does it mean now that Ava has her memory back? Things didn't sound entirely friendly there. Can't wait to find out more.

An update!! Welcome back!! ^.^

I can't help but have this huge, satisfied smile on my face because, ah! I knew the witch had something to do with Ava not remembering everything! I have to admit that I felt just like Brian, though... I thought that conversation went alright? But apparently it didn't. I'm not too sure if I understood everything clearly, too. I got sort of confused when Mabel started talking about Zacky being honest in the beginning... I thought their only talk had been that one where he told her he and Ava were a couple.

It was a great update, nevertheless. I'd been wondering if you would update this again for a long time! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Welcome back! Hope things get better for you!

How I've missed this story! This chapter did not disappoint, it certainly made up for the wait

This chapter has completely baffled me! XD I can't believe I dismissed the idea of the witch casting a spell on Ava! What I don't get, is what the witch meant by saying she could have saved them trouble by Zack being honest. I was under the impression he had never met her before, but maybe he was lying about that. And what she means by Ava "choosing her next actions wisely" I'm thinking that meeting was the calm before the storm, that something bad is going to happen, I just don't know what

I'm with Brian, I thought the meeting went well but obviously not, haha.

I for one am bloody excited for the next chapter!

So I've been absent as of late, but I have read what you have written. So I'm going to start with the first chapter I didn't comment on (Chapter 17).

So I have to be honest that this chapter disappointed me. I was so freaking excited that Zee and Ava were finally going to get down to business. I thought it was funny that Zacky had to have Ava keep her hands to herself otherwise he wouldn't last very long. To be honest I can't blame Ava for her impatience. I can officially say that I’ve met ZV and he is the embodiment of perfection, so I would be impatient too if I had him in my bed.

What was disappointing about this Chapter though was the sudden change in Ava. What the hell made her remember??? Was it the bite? And I know I wanted to her to remember but I sure as hell didn’t want her first memory to be when Zacky almost killed her! That just freaking sucks.

The last thing that I couldn’t get over, was the fact that everyone came brusting into the room and Zacky and Ava are as naked as the day they were born. I just couldn’t get over that image; Brian holding a naked Ava and Matt restraining a naked Zack.

Furthermore I’m annoyed that as soon as Ava remembers Zack becomes the bad guy again. What the hell?!?!

May last thing is…Why did Matt ask if he need to punch Zacky in the face??? I’m afraid I didn’t understand their unspoken conversation there.

On to the next chapter (18):

Okay so there wasn’t much to say about the beginning of this chapter. Towards the end of this one though it got weird. It was like Ava flipped a switch and just turned her emotions off. Then she starts talking about Brian getting out and away from her family when she couldn’t…Random. Then to make it even more random she declares that they should go to Cheesecake Factory.

Now my question is, what is in Sacramento? And why does Brian need to go with her?!?!?! I don’t like this new Ava at all.

Chapter 19:

I’m glad Brian and I are on the same page as for how Ava was acting in the last chapter.

Okay so I’m a little confused on here…what is the witch talking about here:

Once more, the witch appeared completely unconcerned over the threat. “I’d strongly advise against that, my dear,” she dismissed easily, her expression morphing into one of consideration. “Did your mate truly not warn you how ineffective such a threat would be? I find that curious.”

By the way the blonde in front of him straightened just a fraction, he could tell that particular bit of information had caught her off guard. But did that mean that she hadn’t know Zacky had even met this witch, or did she simply assume he wouldn’t have figured out that it was a witch? He couldn’t be sure.

The witch on the other hand... “Ah, I see,” the woman drew out, her lips pulling into a not-entirely-friendly smile. “Your mate overstated your relationship, then, didn’t he? Interesting. I wonder, then, if--”

I didn’t realize Ava was under a spell! That didn’t even occur to me that that could be the reason for her memory loss. But what did the witch mean by Zacky being able to save them trouble if he had been honest?

And what tone did Ava use that Brian didn’t like? Was it surprised? Awe? Upset?

And the end completely lost me. What was with Ava’s answer? Furthermore, what was the witch talking about with Ava choosing her next actions wisely? Lastly, why did Ava say the meeting went badly!?

I’m really sorry I haven’t commented lately. Life has been crazy. Hope all is well with you.

I'm sensing a bad time right now can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I'm so happy you're back!! I've missed this story. But, I'll have to admit I'm as confused as ever!! Hope everything in you life is straightening out.

I was not expecting that from re witch. I'm truly surprised, and extremely curious. I'm both glad and shocked that Ava is back to her old self. I missed her edgy attitude lol. I really want to know what will happen in the future with this witch! And I'm so glad you're back! I hope everything's okay on a personal level. It's been a while. But I have to admit, when I saw the update for this, a little squeal flew from my mouth and I stopped everything to catch up lol. I hope you update again soon! As always, loved the update :) always keeping me on the edge and wanting more!

That witch has got me confused haha. Update soon!

YAY I've been waiting and as always it's worth waiting for no matter how long the wait is. I was surprised about the witch. I can't wait for more :)
Welcome back :)

FINALLY!

F I N A L L Y!

I have to say, I don't know what I was expecting but the witch surprised me. And after that conversation I have no idea what to think. But I am super, duper glad that you updated. Welcome back!

FINALLY!!!! I've been wondering what happened to you! I'll have to read this later and give you a nice LONG comment.

Holy shit!!!
I've got caught up and I'm speechless!!
I wasn't expecting Ava to get back to herself like that!
Please update soon!

Love it! I'm seriously getting addicted to this story and was so disappointed when I hit that last chapter! I can't wait to read more!

I'm starting to get really nervous now. What's she up to? Brian didn't have much time to explain really anything. And if given the actual chance to, would he actually give all of the correct details, or will he throw Zack under the bus? So hard to tell. If I were Brian, I'd feel a little nervous of where she's taking him in her current state of mind. But maybe it's not even bad. Maybe she has something hidden in Sacramento. I just don't know. It's all so hard to tell. I can't wait to find out what's going on. We don't need anyone elses point of view in the next chapter, just Ava's and Brian's so that we can figure out what's up! xP

Holy fucking shit seriously Brian u just made Zacky look like the world class asshole seriously y didn't u mention Zacky not knowing the actual truth when he came out of the mansion or how Matt said some horrible shit to Ava hmmm what the actual fuck, Ava what's in Sacramento and y did u bring Brian and Brian it took u tht long to realized tht she is up to something when she missed the turn, I knew she was up to something when she wanted to get cheesecake like really cheesecake at a time like this Ava who u fooling girl, I hope someone realized tht Brian and Ava r gone just saying, poor Zacky he can't comfort Ava like he is suppose to and it doesn't help tht Ava doesnt to have all her memory back just when Zacky tried to kill her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

OH MY GOD I'VE HAD NO INTERNET FOR FOUR DAYS AND I MISSED SO MUCH!

Ahem.

Well, I gotta hand it to Zack, he's exerting amazing self control! I bet it sucks though, I bet he wants nothing more than to rip each other's clothes off and get down to business! haha. I like how real it is, though.

Oh, ZACK!!! Oh shit, oh HELL! You've done it now! That's an awesome way for her to remember though! But oh, she doesn't remember the explosion, only that he tried to kill her. Dammit, Brian! This is exactly what he's been waiting for, to swoop in and protect Ava. Gah! Everything's crazy! Listen to Zack, Matt! Oh my gahhhd!

I can see where Matt's coming from, her memories of that day were not good for either of them, and she probably is freaking the fuck out! I just hope Brian will do the decent thing and not turn her against Zack.

Matt's right again - gah, I love him - he can't go bursting in and telling her he loves her when she's remembering that he tried to kill her, it'll just fuck her head up even more.

Hahahaha, I'm glad they can find some light in the situation, backwards boxers, lololol.

“Zee, I’ve got to ask you this, Man, and depending on your answer, I might have to punch you in the face.”

Now onto the next chapter! :D

Awww, a Brian/Ava chapter, me likey!

No! Brian why would you tell it to her like that. He's making Zack out to be the bad guy!

Uh oh, what is Ava up to? And what the hell is in Sacremento?!

Shit's getting real, kids!

I'm so sorry it took me so long to read and comment, my damn cat chewed through my internet wire!

Ugh. I don't know what to feel regarding this chapter. Brian could have been a little more... pleasant giving her those news, instead of being like 'yeah, he just left you trapped in a building after you saved him.' No, just no. There's a lot more than that. He should have just refused to tell her anything, and instead call Matt to tell her the truth. Even though Matt has said some nasty things in the past as well.

And I knew she was planning something from the moment she suddenly realized she wanted to go to the Cheesecake Factory! There'd be no way that she just randomly remembered wanting to go there. I only wonder what she's going to do in Sacramento. Is it something regarding her brothers? Or Mabel?

Gah, I'm curious. As always. Loved the chapter! Please update soon :)

I realize Brian could always calm her down, but he needs to step back a little.

Ava and Zack need to sit down and talk(yeah right) things through. I'm happy she got her memory back!! Poor Zacky!

Okay what's in Sacramento???

Update soon!