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Okay, first I need to tell you how damn HAPPY I was to find out that this was a Brian/Ava chapter. I've been praying for this, as weird as that is, and it certainly did not disappoint. The way he just sat in the corner, giving her space without actually leaving is just perfect. But my heart is still aching for her, she has her memory back but it's not all there. If anything, I'd think this is way more confusing than not remembering at all. And when she mentioned the Cheesecake Factory, I was like...seriously...and I couldn't help but laugh when I figured out IT WAS A TRICK, SHE TRICKED BRIAN. I love her even more now haha.

UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

YGLHjfalksdjfkalSDHLKhaK BRIAN is going to fuck everything up sorry for my language and im glad she s back grated she has forgotten very important memories but he's going to mess everything up i'm so mad!!! they were so happy now poor zackys going to be miserable again.

Wooohooo! Ava's back! Well, mostly, kind of. lol But that complicates things for Zacky...

I laughed when out of nowhere Ava just goes, "Let's go to the cheesecake factory." That was really random, but I guess Ava's state of mind is all over the place and Brian isn't sure of the best way to handle this.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Brian! couldn't you be, i don't know, more tactful while explain events to a person that has only a part of her memory back??? Did you really have to go like " I didn’t exactly get all of the details after you ran in to save Zacky’s life and he left you for dead.”? I mean, do you really think that helps? I'm not saying she shouldn't know, but... more tact, more details... actually explain... *just saying*
(why am i talking directly to fictional characters?)
on a different note... Ava is acting weird... Is she going to visit Mabel? or is it someone else?
And finally, I'd like to know what Brian said to her after he got her breathing again...
extra note: awww I got a shout out!

Oh shit! I feel like she's about to do something she shouldn't but idk? At the same time I feel like her and Bri will get in trouble and Zacky will come to the reduce and then happily ever after. But it won't be that simple. Its never that simple.

Ava's confusing me right now. I really wanna know why she needs to go to Sacramento. I loved it as always, I cant wait for more to come :) update soon

OH MY GOD!!!!

I can't believe how amazing this chapter was!! My emotions went on a roller coaster ride. Ava and Zacky together in the first part of the chapter was amazing. And holy shit! I knew it wasn't going to be rainbows and butterflies, but that was intense!

I wonder exactly how much she remembers. But it broke my heart the way Ava reacted and how desperate Zacky was trying to fix the situation or explain himself (even though that really wouldn't have made the situation better like Matt said, at least until everyone calms down. )

Amazing chapter. I can't wait to read about the aftermath of this.

No! No! Nooo! I knew marking her would most probably bring her memory back, but god damn, why doesn't she remember the explosion? Zacky didn't want to hurt her, there was no need for her to panic like that :( He only wanted to make her feel safe... And then Brian had to come. Of course he had to come! Gah, I seriously hope that he doesn't tell her everything about what happened after Zacky trying to strangle her, because Zacky also has the right to tell her the truth from his point of view. Ugh, I'm really disliking Brian at the moment >:(

This chapter was so incredibly amazing! In one moment they were behaving like an awesome couple and in the next moment everything comes back to her... I'm rally glad she's got her memory back. I only wished she wouldn't panic that much and react that way about Zacky...

I loved this chapter! Please update soon!!

Damn I was not expecting tht to happen holy shot tht caught me off guard but I figured something was goin to happen when he felt her stiffen during the orgasm, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Wow! I didn't expect her memory back that fast OR her to regain it that way. So she doesn't remember the explosion?Hmm..

If she's in heat then that means there is a chance ..uhoh..no bueno.

I was thrilled to see another update so soon..hopefully another one soon also?

Holy hell when did you start updating again? I need to start checking my email more... Holy hell she's got her memory back? It may have came back when Zacky marked her again... And she could be in heat too... Wow this is getting deep and I love it. I can't believe that Ava had a secret meeting with her brother but I'm not going to jump to conclusions like it did the first time... I can wait for more....awesome updates I didn't know I missed so much!!!!!

Holy jizz. Oh man. I just can't. I don't even..Meh? I don't know what to say! lol. Loved the chapter. It was bound to happen sooner or later. I wonder what will go down. This is going to tear Zack :/ poor guy. He was trying so hard lately. I wonder how she's going to react now.

I'm kind of sad how things are going to change for Zack and Ava.

I SAW IT COMING! Thats all that can be said. I loved this chapter. I cursed several times while reading it, it was wonderful.

I come to 3 chapters that make me happy, sad and just heart broken. I was so unbelievably happy for this chapter and last chapter. It seemed so nice, they're finally doing this and being happy, Ava's happy and zackys happy and then bam she has to remember everything. I don't know wether to hate you or hate you right now lol

No but seriously he loves her, c mon. Stop treating him like the bad guy *cough, Brian and Ava *cough. Just seriously he's just trying to be happy with her. I just really want them to be normal happy. I mean as normal as they're gonna get but gah, just please listen to him. This is gonna kill me.

I'm glad she has her memory back and all but I just hate that she'll remember how much he makes her seem so unhappy. I just want her to stop hating him. He's been so sweet, kind, patient. He loves you.

*silently screaming* Ava remembers!!!!!!! Though holy bad timing batman. I really hope they can get this all figured out soon, sorry I've been quiet I've been reading on my phone and it is a pain to do comments on there. Love your writing and can't wait for the next update.

The last two chapters were both amazing. I didnfind it funny Jen Ava and Johnny where hanging out. It was an amazing chapter :) I'm so glad Ava now remembers but I feel bad for Zack I hope he gets to explain things to her and all. And I'm happy for Brian because he gets he's best friend back even if she's a bit of a reck right now. Anyway I can't wait for more and I look who tears I how the others react when they find out she has her memories back :) update soon :)

So I read both updates, planning on leaving one long comment about both once I was finished but holy, holy, holy CRAP THAT LAST CHAPTER! She remembers! I have been waiting for this moment, waiting for it all to come back to her, waiting for her to finally remember Brian (if it's not obvious by now that I have a soft spot for him, well good god) but now that it's happened...I don't quite know what to say. I never imagined that it would happen during sexytime, or that it would be the exact memory of the time he choked her. Poor Ava. That is definitely not something I wanted her to remember so quickly. Brian has her now, though, which is good. I'm sure he's relieved to have his friend back, but what does this mean for her and Zacky now? HOLY MOSES. Excellent chapters, as always! <333

omg you couldn't just let them cuddle after the love making, could you?
but anyway, we knew she was gonna remember sooner or later and i had a feeling that sex wouldn't help their relationship...
so, i guess i should tell you, i love this story and i read and loved "what we left unsaid" (i actually started reading it before you finished it, so i've been lurking your stories for a while) and i'm sorry i never commented before, but i never really know what to say... i feel stupid just saying "oh i love it! bye", so i usually just read and subscribe... *blushes* i'm trying to be more suportive, i guess :) (and i'm totally failing, too much rambling, not much feedback)

My heart was almost breaking for her. And lol! I did not happen to pick up on the in heat hint. But seeing someones comment about it made me go, "Duh!" Maybe that's also a small reason Zacky has been trying to avoid her. I think that Johnny realized that and that's why he was trying to take her to Matt. Ugh, it all makes sense now! lol the clues were all there! Man, I feel so silly xD Lol poor Zacky. I love how he's still seems to be gentle with her. I can't wait to see how this rolls out lol. Please update soon :D