Happy - Comments

so sad to see this end! as much as it sucks to see them not end up together, I like that it wasn't a stereotypical ending! such a great story! xx

Finally a story without a happy ending! I'm in love!

the end? THE END? i can't believe it! yes yes yes i need a sequel! this story is perf, please don't let it end here! xx

I second what the others said ... a sequel would be mighty fine :)

I second what the others said ... a sequel would be mighty fine :)

No please no

duuude seriously you made me cry :') ahahaha
writing wise, you are amazing <3 i hope you write a sequel!
x

NO OK NO YOU JUST CANT DO THAT NOPE.
can't you do a short sequel like you did with Paint You Wings because that was great and Zooey and Alex HAVE to get together or I'll cry..

P.s. you have created another amazing story with your fabulous writing so well done

omg why would you do that you just ruined my entire day why is there no sequel I'm going to die

1. "the ones that had tears in them, but with coloured material under the tears instead of his bare skin" are those tHE PATCH JEANS?!? I love the patch jeans, and all Alex's other jeans, or…just…the leg thing in general…

2. To be honest, I think he's out getting coffee or breakfast… he wouldn't leave Zooey like that, i mean, he didn't do it those random pointless girls before, he wouldn't do something that bitchy to Zooey

how the fuck could he do that??!!! she deserves a note :(

Please give it a Happy ending (hah see what I did there ... okay that was lame) but seriously ...aw man I love this so much

they are doomed

wonderful updates!! I can't believe they finally kissed!!!

These new chapters are brilliant! Dont get to stressed in writers block, youll do great.

You know what's a cute ship name?

Zalex.

Zooey and Alex.

I ship it

PS - I think everyone's a little insecure about their writing - but yours in great, don't get too stressed

I love you for uploading so much in the last few days. This is so amazing. It's like I actually FEEL with the people. Thank you for writing this. And awww they kissed :)

(I leave really awkward comments, just a warning)

well, fuck. this story is probably the best thing I've seen in a while.

1. Your writing is gorgeous, and everyone else has already said this, but seriously. gorgeous. I hope you become a novelist because your really fucking good at this. you make the characters' inner monologues interesting to read, and the dialogue always has something witty about it. you keep saying "boring" chapter in you A/N but I look back at it, and am like, that...that was not boring, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

1 (sub point). I started screen capping all the interesting/funny moments and cool stylistic parts, and I sent them to my friend, who, mind you, is a more of Zack Merrick fan (she thinks Alex is the biggest twat out there, and really, he is, we should all be honest.) But while I did this, what ended up happening is, is that I basically sent her pictures of the whole thing. everything. all the chapters.... and she loves this, and wanted me to say your writing made her reading a Gaskarth fic less painful :)

2. Your story, your actual story about Alex being with a bartender is so fucking new, and refreshing. Maybe it's just me, but I've read a lot of Alex fics, and most are the same old Alex/merch girl concept. so this is lovely. I really hope you keep updating it, and I hope it never ends.

3. I also very much love how close to canon this actually is. Whether or not you're doing it on purpose or just, whatever, it still makes this that much more enjoyable. (And I really mean the whole Lisa/Tay thing. Unpopular opinion: Lisa just gives me the creeps, and in pictures she seems to be staring into your soul, and Tay actually really just seems like she wanted something more. and my friend and I have discussed this before, Alex certainly seems like the guy who just likes the security of having Lisa. And heyyyy, you touched on all of that in your writing!)

Oh boy, I get sidetracked a lot.

Any who....

Love your writing. Love the story. I want more, keep updating, please?

wow all these new updates are great

I'm going to hate when this story ends