I love this story so much. Your writing is so poetic, no joke. You could write a 12 page essay about ... idk stones or something boring like that, and I would read it and love it ♥
same with me ( VV ) i have to be pretty fucking interested in a first chapter to continue on...and then comment. This is fucking awesome man..seriously. this is a really unique and amazing story and if you give this story up, i will find you and cut you. That is all, update soon :)
same with me ( VV ) i have to be pretty fucking interested in a first chapter to continue on...and then comment. This is fucking awesome man..seriously. this is a really unique and amazing story and if you give this story up, i will find you and cut you. That is all, update soon :)
I didn't get the chance to comment before so I'm doing it now. First, I haven't seen anything like this on here before which is definitely a 'breath of fresh air,' haha. Secondly, I love your writing style. I think I was reading your other Alex Gaskarth one and in the AN you said you were insecure of your writing. Girl, don't be! I usually can't be bothered to read past the second chapter (much less comment) and you made me want to sub and comment. I am not opposed to the idea of Alex and 'bartender' giving things a go, but I'm fairly sure that was Lisa and she's going to fuck something for them up sooner or later. I loved this! Please update soon. (:
I definitely think you should continue this. You're a really talented writer from what I can tell and I really enjoyed this chapter. I also freaking adore your layout and banner. It's adorable.