The Shores of Freedom - Comments

I like a story hwre the girl isn't throwing herself at the guy.

Holy crap I had no idea you updated four times at one point...anyways. I love where this is going! I feel really bad for Viv but I'm glad she's not just throwing herself at Matt. Brian had no right to just throw Nate and Matt under the bus but it was bound to happen sooner or later.

Holy crap I had no idea you updated four times at one point...anyways. I love where this is going! I feel really bad for Viv but I'm glad she's not just throwing herself at Matt. Brian had no right to just throw Nate and Matt under the bus but it was bound to happen sooner or later.

I'm so excited to see where this goes from here and I'm glad to see that Viv is giving Matt and Nathan a hard time, even though if it's hard to do

This story makes me happy

i like how viv is standing her ground and not all like " well maybe i can give him a chance and he wont hurt me"
i feel bad for vivs friend, the one dating her brother because she was really hurt by the news.
update soon cant wait to read more.

Can't wait for more of this story and I'm glad the updates have picked up again :D

Can't wait for more of this story and I'm glad the updates have picked up again :D

Hot guy for Viv, wohoooo! Can't wait for more!

* i really hope Vivian stays away from matt i'd hate to see something bad happen to her.

* i really hope Vivian stays away from matt i'd hate to see something bad happen to her.

wow brian is a major dick in this story. i really hope vivan

i re-read this chapter and i wanted to comment again. She should really listen to her brother and let him make matt go away , and save her self from more heartache. her brother seems really cool and protective. cant wait to read more

You really need to update more often! I missed this so much!

oh my goodness! i am so into this story its amazing! update asap please!!!!!!!

And now he just doesn't want her anymore?
She just gave him a second chance and he doesn't respect it?!
Stupid asshole..
Update soon please!!!

This story is definitely different. It's fantastic and mystifying in its own way. Matt is absolutely beautiful and entrancing. The wway you have described him is darkly demonic and yet, gratifyingly gallant. He's extraordinary and lovely. I love your character Vivian. She's not your typical Mary Sue character and yet, she is entirely normal. I'm completely in love with this story.

LOVE it!! I'm so glad you didn't give up on this! :D

I just read all of this. I adore it. :)

So glad you're back! I've been looking forward to an update. I hope she forgives Matt!