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  • Metalwhore

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    Welcome back!
    Please update soon!
    February 11th, 2014 at 09:54pm
  • BlackMorphine

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    Wow! You back. Please, update soon <3
    February 11th, 2014 at 08:44pm
  • Vartokk

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    Oh.... How confusing! He's clearly conflicted! I wish I could know exactly what he was thinking!!! lol. But right now I'm just as confused as she is!

    Please update! Clap
    November 15th, 2013 at 04:32am
  • fantasygirltexas

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    He's being bipolar.... LOL
    November 15th, 2013 at 04:00am
  • Hello.Love0588

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    Read the first chapter and fellbin love with this story! Haha Matt is a weirdo his feelings are all over the place! I hope he explains why hes acting like that. Cant wait for the next one!
    November 15th, 2013 at 12:12am
  • BlackMorphine

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    Matt is fucking freak D:
    November 14th, 2013 at 10:44pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Umm.. what the fuck is wrong with him, he's confusing the hell out of her!
    November 14th, 2013 at 09:09pm
  • Vartokk

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    Holy. Shit. Sex trafficking?! I was expecting guns.... drugs... Anything but that! Definitely threw me for a loop. I will be anxiously awaiting an update!
    November 10th, 2013 at 02:41am
  • BlackMorphine

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    Update now U_U
    This is awesome.
    November 7th, 2013 at 02:25pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Wow. I love it, it's very interesting and shady! Update soon please :)
    November 6th, 2013 at 01:32pm
  • cattfeine

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    My interest you have it.
    November 5th, 2013 at 07:58am
  • requiem.

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    I love this and it needs more comments for 4 chapters so quickly! I love that it's a different type of gang story. Keep it up.
    November 5th, 2013 at 07:16am
  • ItsBee

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    I like it
    November 5th, 2013 at 05:42am
  • Vartokk

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    First I just wanna say people are missing out by not reading/commenting on this! This is amazing. The way you portray Matt makes me think of my boyfriend and I love it! I'm definitely going to be subscribing to this one and anxiously waiting on an update!

    Just a couple constructive criticisms:
    1. be careful of using and too much in a sentence
    2. be careful of words that end in 'ly' because they can sound tacky if used too often and
    3. use a synonym for angry every once in a while :P

    Like I said though, I love it! :D
    October 27th, 2013 at 09:05pm
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