The New Girl - Comments

happyamanda (100)

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Sex dreams lol :)

April 22nd, 2014 at 07:23pm

JosieAlyvia (100)

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More please.

April 12th, 2014 at 03:38am

happyamanda (100)

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I like but it seems to be going really slow

April 11th, 2014 at 07:24am

Ms_Vengeance_6661 (100)

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Luckily there were a few updates :) soo awesome! Please more soon

March 24th, 2014 at 07:49pm

bippy102 (100)

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pretty good, please update!

March 13th, 2014 at 03:29pm

Lilium- (100)

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Update, yes? c:

March 7th, 2014 at 09:23pm

n3n3j0y9 (100)

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Update!

February 18th, 2014 at 08:07pm

unactive- (100)

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I like it so far!

January 31st, 2014 at 07:21am

happyamanda (100)

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I hope they get together soon :-)

January 30th, 2014 at 04:24am

happyamanda (100)

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I hope they get together soon :-)

January 30th, 2014 at 04:24am

alvalove (100)

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Hope you can update soon. I like this so so far :D

January 15th, 2014 at 06:11pm

happyamanda (100)

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Really good

please keep updating.

January 13th, 2014 at 07:29pm

Ms_Vengeance_6661 (100)

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Love at the first sight? :D more please

January 12th, 2014 at 01:13pm

mountain_ash (100)

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This is good so far! I like it! Definitely keep!

January 9th, 2014 at 02:48am

Theo Rossi; (150)

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@ Ms_Vengeance_6661
Alright. I'm glad that you are enjoying this story.

January 5th, 2014 at 05:21pm

Ms_Vengeance_6661 (100)

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Keeeep!! I really want to know how this develops :)

January 5th, 2014 at 03:04pm

Theo Rossi; (150)

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@ Bree10
I'm glad that you like it.

December 28th, 2013 at 02:09pm

Bree10 (100)

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Intriguing, definitely keep.(:

December 28th, 2013 at 10:00am

Theo Rossi; (150)

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@ bullets are hailing.
I'm glad you like it. I really don't want Chelsea to be the stereotypical popular girl. It's not really how I see her.

@ ptvjaime
Too be honest I wanted this one to be as a intro chapter for Chelsea. I didn't want it to be too long. Of course, I will probably come back an edit at some point.

November 11th, 2013 at 08:20pm

ptvjaime (1600)

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Chelsea could be any teenage girl, which I think is awesome. No giant info dumps about her family but we totally get the relationships to an extent, which is always really great. I also dig the first person present tense because it's perfect for discovery pieces. And I like how you put her sexuality, Anthony not turning her on like he should. Clever way to phrase it. I can't wait to see more. However, there's something off about the last bit. It doesn't feel like an ending to a chapter. It feels like... There should be something more concluding?

November 11th, 2013 at 07:56am