@ bullets are hailing. I'm glad you like it. I really don't want Chelsea to be the stereotypical popular girl. It's not really how I see her.
@ ptvjaime Too be honest I wanted this one to be as a intro chapter for Chelsea. I didn't want it to be too long. Of course, I will probably come back an edit at some point.
Chelsea could be any teenage girl, which I think is awesome. No giant info dumps about her family but we totally get the relationships to an extent, which is always really great. I also dig the first person present tense because it's perfect for discovery pieces. And I like how you put her sexuality, Anthony not turning her on like he should. Clever way to phrase it. I can't wait to see more. However, there's something off about the last bit. It doesn't feel like an ending to a chapter. It feels like... There should be something more concluding?