June 25th, 2008 at 05:53pm
OH MY GOOD LORD!!!!! If you didn't have the sequel already up, I think that I'd choke you. Fly over there, get drunk with you and then choke you once you passed out. That's the bottom line.
The chapter before last...wow. I was amazed. I knew that Z would do something to get Lea alone so Brian could have the time that he needed to do what Z promised him he could do (which I'm disappointed in by the way...no damned sex scene with Brian and Lea--I was so totallly looking forward to some down and dirty rough sex between the two I just pictured them doing it that way) and Z worked that out wonderfully.
The last chapter...I wasn't expecting that to come at all! What in the HELL was wrong with Brian for telling her when he *supposedly* got what he wanted and *promised* that he woulddn't tell IF he got what he wanted. Okay, so it's open so we really don't know if they did anything--he just kind of speculated that they did since he said that she felt like she cheated on Z's ass--but we don't know if they really did because you didn't write about it nor come out and say that they did, nor did you tell us if he actually told her, but we're just left to figure that he did because she took off with the ring left there on top of the note on the mirror.
So, there are a lot of questions, and yeah it was an abrupt ending, but that's they way it needed to be.
I'm happy and I bow to you for a job well done and for giving into my demands and for continuing it so quickly because I'm a demanding bitch that needed this like a fat kid needs cake.
So I give you hugs, kisses and gratitude for a job well done and I'm off to find Lips of Deciet....
LOVE YOU!!!
He is such an ass! First the drugging and then the almost out-right raping of her when she was telling him no and he had such a problem with Z doing what he did in NYC? My blood is boiling.
Okay, I'm caught up now. Finally. Even though it wasn't happy--happy sex scene, it was still hot as hell.