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  • ameliameechanx

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    i've just read all of the comments and honestly as much as i want them to eventually get back together, i also think matt really needs to hurt too. not just from having to be alone the past few years but he completely ruined edens life. he was everything to her and matt lied to her for so long. granted that matt at least felt guilty about it but i hope he pays for everything. eden definitely shouldnt forgive him easily. i absolutely love the story though, you are a bloody fantastic writer!xx
    January 19th, 2014 at 11:30pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    Amazing chapter
    January 19th, 2014 at 07:23pm
  • heretic.

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    Just read all six chapters, like is hectic for me too!

    I like that Zack is her friend now, not being a dick to her anymore. And actually taking care of her, it's sweet. I like how all of them are protective over her now too.

    But Matt is hurting too. Sure, he made a mistake, a big mistake but he's broken up too. It's so sad for the both of them. I hope they get to talk soon, if not to get back together then to give them both some sort of closure so they can move on and be happy. But I really hope they get back together haha.
    January 19th, 2014 at 03:13am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    Zack and Brian seem to be highly protective of Eden now. Matt is definitely broken himself, that was evident to me in the first part of the chapter.

    Really looking forward to more encounters of Matt and Eden.
    January 19th, 2014 at 02:40am
  • mgn.

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    ugggggggggggh I love this so much
    January 18th, 2014 at 06:59pm
  • Drop_DeadM

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    I literally love this story. And can completely get where Eden is coming from. Poor sod.
    January 18th, 2014 at 02:57pm
  • fantasygirltexas

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    I am so heartbroken for them. So sad.
    January 18th, 2014 at 01:42pm
  • RavenArtist93

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    Wow.
    That scene with Matt and the others was a bit...heart breaking.
    You can just tell, not just how broken Eden is...but how broken Matt is as well.
    I'm anxious to see where the road leads for the two of them.
    I hope they get back together.
    But it will take time.
    January 18th, 2014 at 11:21am
  • Metalwhore

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    They need to be together again. It's so sad, they are so broken, it makes my heart ache.. Please update soon, I love this story.
    January 18th, 2014 at 11:15am
  • AJ9

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    I feel so sad Sad for both of them. I hope they can get together again and be happy. They obviously love one another. Please update soon xx
    January 18th, 2014 at 10:04am
  • fiction246

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    :( sad...I love that she asked if Zack would still be her friend haha looking forward to more!!
    January 18th, 2014 at 08:48am
  • synful_vengenz

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    Your stories are hands down amazing! You have me hooked. I love your writing style and that this is such a deep story. <3
    January 17th, 2014 at 01:32am
  • Corinne Patricia

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    I can absolutely relate to Eden. I felt/feel like doing nothing but lashing out at my former lover after he shattered my heart.
    You go girl!! Let out that anger that is all built up inside!!
    January 16th, 2014 at 04:58am
  • fantasygirltexas

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    I hate how broken they both are. And I really wish she hadn't lashed out like that. She's going to regret it.
    January 16th, 2014 at 01:31am
  • requiem.

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    Honestly, I really hate Eden right now. God.
    January 14th, 2014 at 08:43am
  • SJT6661

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    my computer has been broken and i had to read on my phone and i couldn't comment. But i hope that Matt doesn't do anything to make Eden upset along with the passing of her mom. Maybe Zacky could be there as a shoulder to cry on? Or they could get close, *wink wink* haha Update soon :)
    January 13th, 2014 at 01:19am
  • Dancing_in_Shadows

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    So good! Pleeease let them be together cuz its really sad to see Eden like this!
    January 12th, 2014 at 11:53pm
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    Great chapter. Although, I was kinda hoping for a screaming match on Eden's end. But I can wait for that if it's planned for future chapters. :)
    January 12th, 2014 at 11:48am
  • topsy krets

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    Adore this. <3 pleeeeease update more often, I can't stand waiting to read this story; it's so good. <3
    January 12th, 2014 at 11:28am
  • Metalwhore

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    Matt deserves to feel pain. He broke her heart and now that she reminds him of everything he has done, he should feel the same as she did. Love this story and can't wait for the next update!
    January 12th, 2014 at 10:41am