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  • Noblesse

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    I already like Amy, she seems like the only person that can cheer Eden up, even if just a little bit.
    I was asking myself what could make Eden and Matt meet again but I have to say, killing Eden's mother didn't even cross my mind! I'm so shocked! :O Eden's already so broken, I think she isn't nearly as strong as she thinks :/
    Nway, hope to read more soon! :3
    xoxo
    December 10th, 2013 at 04:47pm
  • AJ9

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    She is so broken Sad. She needs Matt to make her happy again.

    Please update soon xx
    December 10th, 2013 at 12:11pm
  • akmo4725

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    That sucks.....hopefully at can help fix what he broke! Cant wait for more
    December 10th, 2013 at 11:35am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    oh no:( her cold attitude breaks my heart, she needs to find her happy again.
    December 10th, 2013 at 07:58am
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    I'm starting to think - by the way Eden is treating people - that Eden isn't nearly as strong as she makes herself out to be But maybe thats glaringly obvious >_> idk it was a good chapter. update soon :)
    December 10th, 2013 at 07:38am
  • heyjude;;;

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    @ CrazyPebbles21
    You'll find out later :)
    And I didn't even think of that! I forgot his sister is named that. Haha.
    December 10th, 2013 at 06:18am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    Amazing chapter
    What happen with her father?
    For a minute I thought maybe Amy was Matt's sister Amy but that's crazy, right? Haha :)
    I already love it :D
    December 10th, 2013 at 06:06am
  • fantasygirltexas

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    Poor Eden. I'm glad she's going gone though. Her sister needs her.
    December 10th, 2013 at 06:05am
  • mgn.

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    this is off to a good start I'm so excited to see where it goes :)
    December 10th, 2013 at 05:30am
  • RazzyVengeance6661

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    I love that your story Temper has a sequel now :) I love it so much can't wait for more
    December 6th, 2013 at 01:27am
  • Corinne Patricia

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    well maybe if you have 72+ subscriptions, you would post again super soon!!
    December 5th, 2013 at 07:06am
  • amandap

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    I found Temper by accident but I completely loved it. I am in love with this one..mooooore
    December 4th, 2013 at 11:09pm
  • iwsytp1

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    More please
    December 4th, 2013 at 08:19pm
  • Metalwhore

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    I can't believe how miserable and broken she is. Hope they met again soon!
    December 4th, 2013 at 02:58pm
  • AJ9

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    Well I'm already hooked and I've only read one chapter! She really is in a bad way isn't she? I wonder if Matt is feeling the same way? Maybe we'll find out in chapter two?

    Hope you can update again soon. xx
    December 4th, 2013 at 01:00pm
  • fantasygirltexas

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    I'm so happy for this! And she's so broken that I wanna cry...
    December 4th, 2013 at 06:32am
  • heyjude;;;

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    @ bri-jess
    It's up in the air at this point. I'm getting close to the chapter that's going to have to make me decide. This story is set during HTTK. I love Arin, I really do, but I don't know if I can take Jimmy out. Also, I don't know how everyone else will react. It's a hard question for me, and I don't want to upset anyone by removing him from the story, even if it doesn't make sense.
    December 4th, 2013 at 05:37am
  • Noblesse

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    I think the chapter was posted twice, hm '-'
    And Eden is so miserable, poor girl :/ Hope she finds her happiness (a.k.a. Matt, hehe) again soon In Love
    December 4th, 2013 at 04:04am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    I love it already :)
    Great chapter
    December 4th, 2013 at 03:42am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    I love it already :)
    Great chapter
    December 4th, 2013 at 03:42am