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  • fiction246

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    Oh my goodness!!! That was so sad!!! Brian was so happy for a bit there...that's just so sad :( poor Ethan!! I really hope Brian doesn't do anything stupid!!! Looking forward to more :)
    December 14th, 2013 at 12:53pm
  • akmo4725

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    Nooo they were sooo happy! Ethan dying scares me I just hope Brian stays strong wit Matt by his side. This makes me cry, but it's all a part of life. It's not always happy and how real you write that is insane. I hope Brian doesn't relapse into the bad ways of before...great chapter can't wait for the next update!!
    December 14th, 2013 at 11:32am
  • JessLoui

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    I was so hopeful there for a minute. Now I just want to break down and cry. You're an amazing writer. Look foward to the next chapter.
    December 14th, 2013 at 11:17am
  • AJ9

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    That was such a sad chapter Sad. Brian was doing so well when he had Ethan to focus on. Now he's gone, he feels useless again. I feel for Matt too. It's taking it's toll on both of them.

    Please update soon xx
    December 14th, 2013 at 10:58am
  • mochi.

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    Poor Brian. It's just one loss after the other. I have a really bad feeling about this. I'm not sure how much more Matt can take, and that really worries me too. But still, amazing chapters, and I can't wait for more updates. :D
    December 14th, 2013 at 10:00am
  • A. J.

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    omg, just read the first few paragraphs. Poor Matt thinking he was getting shit on in chp 12 when he was fixing the sink. LOLOL

    This line was just... WOW -- The guitarist pulled away gently, reaching out his hand to cup Matt’s cheek. “Matt,” he whispered softly, gently. “Jesus, it’s about time you fell apart.”

    This chapter was beautiful, funny, sad and had intimacy. It was perfect. :)
    December 14th, 2013 at 05:20am
  • A. J.

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    I like your authors notes. I agree. You wrote wonderfully and showed the vulnerablility in Brian and Matt. They're so in love and can't be away from each other for long and that's really hot! :D I was teary with Matt at the beginning there but Zacky, that dude had some words for him! lol Glad the guys are on the mend... maybe I said that too soon, better read the next chp.
    December 14th, 2013 at 04:43am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    they had sex :) and it was romantic in a way and them talking at the end was perfect because matt opened up more and brian did too, i'm glad they are slowly getting back to the new old them
    December 13th, 2013 at 06:18pm
  • BlackMorphine

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    This chapter is just.. wow.
    December 11th, 2013 at 08:49pm
  • BlackMorphine

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    This chapter is just.. wow.
    December 11th, 2013 at 08:49pm
  • BlackMorphine

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    This chapter is just.. wow.
    December 11th, 2013 at 08:49pm
  • heretic.

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    I'm crying yet again, by the time this story is finished, I'll be an empty shell haha. Even the happy, romantic chapters have me crying, I'm a mess of emotions haha.

    I love the intensity of their feelings for one another, that they love each other so deeply, it's so lovely and romantic. I think them removing their rings was a turning point in their relationship and yes, a lot of firsts for them but I'm glad that Brian seems a little better now so they can share those times and look back on them with happiness instead of sorrow.

    All their cards are on the table now, they both know how the other feels so the only way is up now. But of course, I am expecting more doom and gloom haha. That Jimmy line..*sob*

    I've fallen head over heels in love with this story, it's perfect!
    December 11th, 2013 at 04:39pm
  • Synful_Shadows

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    OMG!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!! They are moving in the right direction. I love to see the intimicy between Brian & Matt. My favorite part was where Brian now wants to take care of Matt. This whole story hits close to home & I'm glad to see it.

    Plz update soon! xx
    December 11th, 2013 at 04:37pm
  • AJ9

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    God I love this! I hope it doesn't get boring me saying that all the time. It's just that reading their feelings for each other and baring their souls like that, it's just so raw, honest and open and it's really refreshing to read a story like this. You're such a talented writer and this is one of the stories I look for each time my inbox is updated.

    Please update again as soon as you can. xx Cool
    December 11th, 2013 at 01:20pm
  • akmo4725

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    This story gets better every time you update!!! I love the fact Brian wanted to take care of Matt and demanded the sex almost! The way you write it is insane. The emotions, them being together and in love is amazing! It's a nice break from the doom and gloom!! I know there will probably be some gloom coming, but I hope they still have each other through it! Because they can do it together!!! Update soon I can hardly wait!!!
    December 11th, 2013 at 12:58pm
  • Synful Cocktail

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    The way you wrote this was so beautiful and just oh my god. I loved it. I'm so glad that they moved up another step in their relationship and that Brian is getting better.
    December 11th, 2013 at 12:20pm
  • JessLoui

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    I just...wow. I don't really know how to describe how I felt about that chapter. It was beautiful as usual. Kinda made me want to cry but in a really good way.
    December 11th, 2013 at 10:48am
  • fiction246

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    wonderful chapter :) I love that they are trying to get on with their lives together and are doing their best to move away from the pain in their past. It is obviously still there and will always in some form be there but they are trying to be happy and I love that!!! And I love that they were intimate...even if they probably shouldn't have :P really great chapter!! looking forward to the next one!!!
    December 11th, 2013 at 09:52am
  • heretic.

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    Oh my god, you've certainly put my emotions through the wringer with those last two chapters! I actually sobbed reading the part where Matt was kicked out, poor guy! But I suppose something good came from it, it made them both realise their feelings for one another. And finally the others are backing off, I'm glad they finally see that Matt needs Brian just as much as Brian needs Matt.

    "I need you like I need air." Man, that line made me tear up all over again! I'm so glad they have a little bit of hope, that Brian seems to be getting better now but my god, when I read that line where Matt's mum had to tell him something, I swear my own heart stopped! I've never read a chapter so damn fast! Haha.

    I'm like a glass case of emotion right now, but I do love this story! I truly love the way you write this pairing, so believable and real. Cannot wait for more!
    December 10th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    that made me cry happy tears of joy that they are slowly both getting better
    December 9th, 2013 at 07:24am