Everything about this was perfect...the ending could not have been better or more appropriate! I love the sense of hope, both overall and between the two of them. Made me smile. Have a Merry Christmas!
Not gonna lie, I'm incredibly sad that this story is over, just like all of your others, I fall so deeply in love with them so quickly. I hope you'll be writing a new story soon, preferably Bratt haha.
I love that the lyrics Brian was writing was St James <3 Love that song. And I'm so glad he feels better enough to even write something in the first place. I shall now use my imagination and imagine them happy and together :)
Merry Christmas to you too, hope you have a brilliant day!
I read the author's note at the end of the last chapter and just stared blankly at the first line. I don't want it to be over yet. I loooove this story and look forward to it all the time. :(
I'm so relieved that the accident wasn't as bad as it could have been...and that they had a breakthrough at the end, Brian fully realizing how he'd affected those around him. I can't believe this is almost over. *cries* I can't wait to read more from you, though! =)
I'm so glad Matt only suffered the broken bones he did. I didn't know where you were going to go with that, all I could think was , oh no, what about Brian! Loved the end of this chapter, but I'm so sad that its ending!! Please tell me you already have a new story in mind? Your writing is just so good, I really look forward to anything you write!
I have absolutely LOVED this story from the start and I am GUTTED that its coming to an end. But as they say "all good things must come to an end." I will miss this so much so I hope, very much, that you'll write more Bratt soon. Your stories are fantastic! I'm looking forward to the epilogue so i hope you can update again soon xx
I started reading this chapter while I was waiting for my bus home, I couldn't wait until I got in to read it haha. Oh dear lord! I missed my bus I was that engrossed then actually shouted out "oh my god!" when Matt crashed! Got quite a few funny looks from people but eh, I'm weird anyway XD
My heart was in my mouth, reading so fast to see if Matt was okay! Then sagged against the bus stop when I read he was okay. Pretty broken, but alive! Thank goodness!! I don't think Brian could have survived that!
I'm so glad to see Brian on the mend, that he's somewhat himself again. Of course, he will never be 100% his old self, but at least he's alive and kicking!
I can't believe this story is nearly over, it's been like a whirlwind, but brilliant nonetheless! I can't wait for the epilogue and I hope you write more Bratt, or anything really, because I adore you and your work :D
Great chapter, even if I did nearly pass out in public haha.
I cannot believe this is already ending. I did not expect that car crash in previous chapters, but I knew that it was going to happen as I started reading this new one. I just hope they get their happy ending that they deserve. I wish there was more to this, but I'll be happy as long as they are.
Omg I nearly died when he crashed...that would have been the end of Brian!! I loved this story so much! I went back and read all your old stories too!! Can wait to see what the epilogue looks like!! Happy ending hopefully
I can't believe it's almost over oh my god. I'm going to miss this story so much you don't evenknow. I loved every minute of it!Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
@ Mrs. McCarron THANK YOU for commenting! I love to hear that my story can draws comments out of people who don't usually leave any. And you have no idea how much of a boost it is to read a comment like yours!
And SOA....WTF?! I was NOT expecting that, and I have so many pent up emotions! I need to know what happens next, because I need retribution and justice and I need to wrap Jax in cotton wool and give him a hug! Hands down, probably the most shocking season finale EVER!
Okay, so I've been reading this for a while and I haven't commented because...well, basically every chapter leaves me speechless. I don't know what to say, but I wanted you to know that I LOVE this story. I love that it's realistic and not just sunshine and rainbows all the time, even as it breaks my heart to read about them going through all of this. I guess it's kind of like when you watch a movie that you KNOW will make you cry. Lol. Anyway, keep up the fantastic work! And hey, I watch "Sons of Anarchy." You wanna talk about that season finale?????
Another awesome chapter. I really felt bad ofr Brian. He thought he was helping Ethan, but Ethan was too troubled. Brian thinking it was his fault was realistic and well thought out. Matt is so strong on the outside. I love their relationship. The love making was HOT. Great job on the chapter *and the previous ones too*
:( that's so sad brian was starting to get better by helping someone else and that someone else had to go and hang themselves oh my god i havent cried so much reading a story as i have with this one
Oh no, I felt such hope that things would get better, Brian getting excited about seeing Ethan and helping him. This is such a set back for them both. I hope with all hope that Brian will be okay and not relapse, that would kill Matt!
I thought the bracelets were so sweet, Brian's promise to Matt that he would get better. Le sigh. I love their relationship, how close they are, how deeply they feel for each other. It's perfect.
I hope too that Matt doesn't have a breakdown, putting all this pressure on himself to keep Brian alive, it's gotta be taking its toll on him too. I'm praying for a happy ending here haha.