LOL. Stephanie putting Daryl in his place was just super cool to read. Sorry I haven't left my comments but been sooooo busy. Well done on the last 3 chapters. :)
Suspense is never a bad thing, it'll just make finding out that much better. :) Nat needs to let Merle in a little bit, he's trying so damn hard. And as always Daryl and Jarah time was awesome. :D
Loved it. So good and can't wait to read more. Very cautious to what melee was doing, sure it had something to do with Jackson but can't quiet fight it out. Update quickly please.
It would be awesome if Nat got a hold of Jackson, can almost picture it. You may say the chapter was a filler but it didn't read like one. Excited to read about what happens at the lake house.
Slimy little so-and-so that Jackson and the boss isn't much better either. If I was Merle, who has spent so many years in prison, I would have been so tempted to just run the man over and do the time. I feel so sorry for Jarah.
Wow. . . Jackson deserved what he got, if not more. And her boss is just as big of an ass. Good thing she has Daryl now. With every chapter I love Daryl more and more. Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I didn't mention Merle watching videos as a criticism. The scene was brilliant as it was anyway. Besides you can always make him suffer the ultimate birthing joy, like having to deliver the baby himself? *hint hint* Just kidding.
Another great chapter as usual. Jackson really gets under my skin and him being outside the doctors is just the kind of stuff the slime ball would do. Anyway, great job.
Ok, so you had me giggling my head off. I can imagine Daryl, the badass and hunter and future zombie killer getting a total shock watching birth videos. I mean, it doesn't matter how hard you are, that stuff will scare most man to death, especially the first time around.
Only way that would of been better is if Merle was sitting next to Daryl and watched it with him.
It's great to see Merle in a better light. His decision that the baby will be a Dixon was lovely and Nat getting under his skin like that was brilliant too. I can see her as the type to tame him a bit. Yay for the next chapter.