That was fantastic. Just the type of thing you would expect from a slimy ex. Absolutely loved Daryl bumping into the guy on the ay out too. He just wouldn't be able to help himself. Very nice indeed!
Very realistic. It can be so hard for people to get over their own hang ups and overcome stuff they have experienced, you made a really great job at showing how they both dealt with it and how , if you push yourself and allow that to happen, you can have so much fun. Really great job with this chapter. The piercing took me by surprise!
Loved, loved, loved it. Them both coming out of their shells is amazing, they slowly become more and more confident with each other. Glad that one of them finally took charge. :)
I swear your updates get better and better every single time! I love that Daryl is confident enough now to throw some smart ass remarks back at Merle! Absolutley brillant update! I don't think I could love this anymore then I already do!
The main storyline is just great as I keep saying, but what really completes it is the interaction with all the other characters, not just Nat and Merle but even uncle Frank. The way he constantly takes Daryl's side and tried to put Merle in his place is the kind of thing a man of that age and in that position would do. I may well start running out of compliments soon.
I'm loving this story more and more every time you put another chapter up. I also love the fact that Nat is able to give Merle a run for his money. Its just cool, and so vivid! You are fab!
You seriously have no idea how much I love this! My absolute favourite Daryl fanfic I've ever read! I seriously grin like a chesher cat everytime I see an update! Cannot wait for the next update!! Superb writing!! Xx